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A Random Pokemon RP~! O_O!(OOCC)
ChibiVampire:
Before I do post.... I am confused... Duo in his first post said he was on the road, while I got my egg from a lab... To be honest I wanted to hatch a Snorunt, because i already had the Dawn stone... :p
Anyway, your post don't make sense to me... >.>!
I thought Cloud was a ditto... I mean... At first his post didn't make sense if it wasn't a ditto... But I changed it because for some reason I would seem dumb again, but glad to know it was a Ditto...
Yay cookie... =w=...
Amphi:
--- Quote from: YouHearThat on June 20, 2010, 06:01:28 AM ---
--- Quote from: duotent on June 20, 2010, 04:44:35 AM ---what are you supposed to write as a egg then im a ponyta egg
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1. you didn't use proper grammar
2. not enough details
3. you didn't label your RP character in your first post, how are we suppose to know who you are writing for?
4. doesn't even make sense
that excuse (up top) doesn't matter to anyone because if spirit had to write about a egg, he would have at least wrote more than 1 sentence, prolly a paragraph or two :P
please try to correct your mistakes before Amphy or Chibi does something.... :-X
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thank you Youhearthat, sorry i was unable to talk about this issue, girlfriend stuff and all hehe
spirit:
*wiggle* The sun shone brightly on the egg. The egg rested in the grass, snuggled and embraced by the blades of green, still lightly damp with the morning dew. *wiggle* A light wind pushed the grass, and the water droplets pressed against the egg. *wiggle* It was still early morning, but the sun was shinning brightly, and without a cloud in the sky, it wasn't long before the moisture evaporated off of the little egg.
Inside, the pokemon could hear the rustling of footsteps that came from outside, but echoed in it's little home. The pokemon clenched it's body, and relaxed. *wiggle* It wouldn't be long now before it hatched.
Not far from the egg, a seviper watched hungrily. The seviper made it's move at the egg, but a zangoose jumped in to attack the seviper, thus continuing their eternal hatred for one another. In the conflict, the egg was bumped, and it rolled down a hill. The still unborn pokemon began tossing, and flipping uncontrollably as the egg made it's way down the grassy hillside. Suddenly it came to a stop, and the pokemon's body rammed itself against the inside of the shell, with all the force built up from the momentum of the fall.
Once again, the pokemon clenched it's body, and then flexed it outward, and twitched. *wiggle* The egg was now sitting next to a glistening creek, and the sound of running water flowed through the pokemons ears. *wiggle It was time. The pokemon flexed out one of it's legs, and pressed hard against the inner shell.
The egg cracked, and a pointy stem poked through for a brief moment before returning inside. The leg emerged again, this time pushing back more of the shell, and with it, another stemmed leg came out. As the egg cracked open more and more, more legs pushed out, and forced the egg open. Eventually, a spinarak found its way out of its old home, and into the new world.
The spinarak blinked, and blinked again. It looked at the sky, and at the sun. It looked at the water, and at the rocks. It looked at the grass, and at the hill it had rolled down. It looked at the tree that gave it shade, and the egg it had come from, only moments ago. There was still some sticky web from the inside of the egg that clung to the spinaraks leg, and as it walked, the web attached itself to the grass, and fell off the leg of the newest born pokemon into our world.
--- Quote from: YouHearThat on June 20, 2010, 06:01:28 AM ---
--- Quote from: duotent on June 20, 2010, 04:44:35 AM ---what are you supposed to write as a egg then im a ponyta egg
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that excuse (up top) doesn't matter to anyone because if spirit had to write about a egg, he would have at least wrote more than 1 sentence, prolly a paragraph or two :P
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ChibiVampire:
That is a very intellectual post... 0w0...
Night... =w=...
Jerry:
I can't see a clue about Cloud... wait... how can Kin be at two places, I mean, in the Lab and in the woods... oh I now get it XD
That took a long time :-[
EDIT: Oh, Chibi has said it already in one of the posts.... -.- (Sorry for being slow today... I think I went too fast this morning to prepare the party of today)
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