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Uknown - <Witty title hereya.>
Hakurin:
Definitely an interesting plot. The main character, Duthar, captures your attention, and he's rather peculiar. Not to mention, at least for me, he strikes as a rather beast character, considering he lives alone (or so that's how it seems) and fights for survival. <<Successfully at that>>
Oh, and out of curiosity, did you happen to get that message I sent when you first posted this piece online?
Raikt:
--- Quote from: Hakurin on August 09, 2010, 06:55:06 PM ---Definitely an interesting plot. The main character, Duthar, captures your attention, and he's rather peculiar. Not to mention, at least for me, he strikes as a rather beast character, considering he lives alone (or so that's how it seems) and fights for survival. <<Successfully at that>>
Oh, and out of curiosity, did you happen to get that message I sent when you first posted this piece online?
--- End quote ---
I never received a message, no.
And for anyone interested, I'm actually still working on that Pokemon idea a friend wanted me to. It's coming along nicely. I should have something to post of it soon.
Pubbles:
I figured it out!!
He made a POKEBALL!!!
He's going to catch the Evil lord! Roll Credits!
Oooookay... Now that I got that out of my system, I wanted you to know that I love it.
It was hard for me to read at first (the lengthy sentences are always bad for me) so I had to read it three times, and I never stopped liking it.
I get a nice feel for the vendetta Duthar has, and why (without any dialogue or monologue!) and I am hoping you'll find the time to finish the next part soon. I know it's been a little while since you posted it, but I enjoyed it, well done.
-Pubbs
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