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Silver:
so its yellow...pichu, pikachu,manectric, elekid, or electabuzz? :p
anyways, i wanna request to put a gym in olivais. A flying one.
Also requesting time change. Me and Gold have something big for when its nighttime.

Jerry:
Lol, okay, I'll tell. It's an Elekid ;)

Gold:
I have never been one to keep what I have to say secret. If you don't like what I have to say well tell me. (Or fix the problem)

Lets start off with priority. Priority is important I think.

The games came first way back in 1996 (in japan.) They are the oldest form of pokemon therefore they are the most reliable set of "rules."

Later in 1996 the card game was released. Second oldest, next in line for priority of rules.
Later than the card game in 1996 was the manga. Third oldest, blah blah blah you get it.
Finally in 1997 the anime was released. This is the youngest there its rules are bottom of the priortity list.

Ill explain later why I think this is important.

Ok so for my complaints. Ill start with Sora,  sorry Sora. In the RP you meet up with Suicune, and it is instantly in love with you. In the game pokemon crystal (top of priority list) Suicune runs away many times before you have to battle it to earn its trust. I understand your not trying to mimic the games but making it to easy makes for a bad story. This is my opinion you do not have to agree with me and I am not trying to be mean.

Next Jerry. To put my thoughts very general, you need to learn physics and have to give some conflict in the story. For more specifics keep reading. When you fought in the gym the leaders Azumeril used Iron tail, and you bite it to stop it. Assume iron tail actually turns the tail into iron the force would have been way to strong. (Force = Mass * Acceleration. If the move was fast enough to hit a moving target acceleration must have been high. Iron is a dense material so the mass would be high. A high mass * a high acceleration would equal a large quantity of force.) Biting the end the tail would just crush the jaw of the pokemon not stop the attack. Another thing that happened that confused be, Eleckid used thundershock on the Lapras but the attack was canceled using surf. Surf creates a big wave of water, water conducts electricity, the attach would have been amplified not negated. Also try to win less, it makes for a boring story.

Also, like I mentioned earlier, game rules take priority over anime rules.(in my opinion) So in the middle of the battle, when your pokemon evolved part way through the fight, I think that makes no sense. You gain exp, when a pokemon is defeated, so without having beaten the Lapras your pokemon would not have gained any exp and therefore not evolved.

This is just my opinion, I never said you had to read this post, you dont have to listen to me I just wanted to say what was on my mind.

UnationConsideration:
Gold....you gained respect.

Gold:
Thanks...

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