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The Dark Ones ((OOCC)) and Profiles
Mr. Fox:
ok! I will post that right away!!!
Jerry:
Ah, at last! :P
Wailord:
Name: Alakazam
Level 30
Moves: Hypnosis, Disable, Shadowball, Reflect
Side: The Dark ones
Bio: Ever since my youth I would have been teased and taunted about my patheticness. Now is the time to strike back. Now is where things change. And as commanded I shall destroy the Fighters. This is the Master of the Dark ones will.
Jerry:
Hm... I would have thought you'd take a water type pokemon :P
EDIT: As pointed out by TrainerX, you are modding Mr. Rex's character... I would ask you to edit the parts in bold and repost it.
--- Quote from: trainerx ---((The bold sentences are modding which isn't allowed.))
--- End quote ---
--- Quote from: Wailord on January 23, 2011, 11:04:01 AM ---
I had been watching the entire episode. I watched as the a single Haunter bellowed into Sacker the Absol's face leaving him shaking as if he was dying from the cold.
I closed my eyes to use Mind Reader. Concentrating my Psycic energy on the Haunter as he entered the tent.
"A FIGHTER!"
As I watched the memories of his past unfold. I could see from the moment he had decided to take the path of a Fighter.
I didnt know what was going on inside that tent but there was a slight ominous glow of green emmiting from the tent. If there was any chance it could foil the dark lords plans then our crusade would have gone to waste.
I came to the entrance of the tent as I could hear a voice
"What is this? Celebii. Where are you?"
CELEBII!? I thought to my self. But that could only mean.. NO!
I burst through the tents entrance
The haunter turned round in shock
I used mind reader to survey his thoughts.
Oh no! Its Psyk the Alakazam, one of Duskinoirs Commanders. Where is Celebii!?
I grinned before unleashing a devestating Psybeam, Haunter in sync used Shadowball. There was a huge blast from where our attacks met and the entire tent had been blown away. All that was standing was a single portal and Haunter.
Yet it was at that moment that a small shadow stormed out of the Portal grabbed Haunters hand and dragged him into the portal. I got up immeadiately and stormed towards the portal. I dived in act of desperation but it was too late. The portal had closed and I had jumped straight down a hill, rolled all the way down and landed in the River. I had to find out where the portal led. And reddem my mistake
--- End quote ---
Also, some mistakes I'd like you make your best to avoid:
Psycic -> Psychic
emmiting -> emiting (remember the verb 'to emit')
Celebii -> Celebi
Duskinoirs -> Dusknoir's
devestating -> devastating
immeadiately -> immediately
reddem -> redeem
It's first of all for the readers that I'm pointing them out, and it's also for your own good. You would like to do less mistakes in your essays, yes? :)
Next, you need to get the direct link of the image you want to post, that is you click on 'full size image' after doing the google search. The link should then have .png, .jpeg, .bmp, .gif or something similar.
Oh, and I'm deleting the post you made and that of trainerx for cleanup.
Wailord:
Okay ill edit that ;D
Thanks
I was gunna choose Wailord, but hes so big he wouldnt be able to do anything ! Hahaa
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