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Frenchfry:
Hm... This is making me think that I might write another short story and post it here. Maybe this time peoples will actually reply to it. <.<
Anyways, good work. I'm not the kind of guy that will look at someone and tell them, "Great job!" and put two thumbs up, but exellent job, nonetheless.
Only, your formatting for the dialogue is pretty annoying. Dialogue is supposed to have a new line for each new speaker.
Ex:
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"Lawl this is example text," speaker 1 said.
"OMG nu wai! Does we get paid?" speaker 2 asked
"YOU MUST DIE!!!!1!" Gannon and his minions shouted
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liek that.
LeoReborn:
:D Tankyou.
LeoReborn:
--- Quote from: Frenchfry545 on August 12, 2010, 03:28:42 AM ---Hm... This is making me think that I might write another short story and post it here. Maybe this time peoples will actually reply to it. <.<
Anyways, good work. I'm not the kind of guy that will look at someone and tell them, "Great job!" and put two thumbs up, but exellent job, nonetheless.
Only, your formatting for the dialogue is pretty annoying. Dialogue is supposed to have a new line for each new speaker.
Ex:
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
"Lawl this is example text," speaker 1 said.
"OMG nu wai! Does we get paid?" speaker 2 asked
"YOU MUST DIE!!!!1!" Gannon and his minions shouted
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
liek that.
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Hold on...
*Edits*
Liek Dat?
Frenchfry:
--- Quote from: Unbreakable on August 12, 2010, 03:36:43 AM ---
--- Quote from: Frenchfry545 on August 12, 2010, 03:28:42 AM ---Hm... This is making me think that I might write another short story and post it here. Maybe this time peoples will actually reply to it. <.<
Anyways, good work. I'm not the kind of guy that will look at someone and tell them, "Great job!" and put two thumbs up, but exellent job, nonetheless.
Only, your formatting for the dialogue is pretty annoying. Dialogue is supposed to have a new line for each new speaker.
Ex:
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
"Lawl this is example text," speaker 1 said.
"OMG nu wai! Does we get paid?" speaker 2 asked
"YOU MUST DIE!!!!1!" Gannon and his minions shouted
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
storystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystorystory
liek that.
--- End quote ---
Hold on...
*Edits*
Liek Dat?
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yaliekthatkthnx
St. Jimmy:
--- Quote from: Drbg11 on August 12, 2010, 03:10:55 AM ---St.Jimmy thanks for stealing wut I wrote >:(
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You wrote that before??? I'm sorry dude I didn't notice you want me to take it down?
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