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The Fallen King

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LeoReborn:

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Amazing.....Im speechless....

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Oh snap.
T.T what did you do to get like fifteen billion replies in like thirty seconds? Do you have psychic powers? O.o

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No, just spread the word :D

Pubbles:
Nice work!

As Declan said, it'd really detract from the overall mood and validity of the story to introduce pokemon into it.

I like a little bit of a mystery, or rather something that I can figure out through the story and find out if I'm right or wrong about later on.

(That's what makes me keep going back to Authors like Steven Erikson, Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson and Brent Weeks...)

Throw a little in with this and you'll have a very strong story, even if all we get are small blocks of it at a time.

Keep it up! We want to see the next part as soon as you can!
-Pubbs

Frenchfry:
Meh, well, ya gotta keep the crowd in mind. No pokemon then. It's not that hard for me to remove them from the story, seeing as they were going to have an extremely miniscule part anyways.

Pubbles:
Good Call.

And I appreciate the fact that you used Third Person Omnipotent. It makes it an easier read for me... The only thing I think would help make it a little easier is to space out the Dialogue (with double spacing). It just makes it easier to keep in mind who is speaking.

-Pubbs

Frenchfry:
I'm about halfway done with my next installment. I'll post it when I finish, but I won't rush it. Here's a little teaser. It's a journal entry of Stefan's, explaining the basic premis of the next 'sode.

Day 3, month 5, year 530.
Until now I have been making base in the pitiful shambles of what was once a great kingdom. When I look upon the ruins that I call my home, I can’t help but feel my predecessors would be revolted by what their kingdom has become. That is why I am leaving. In Geoffrey’s Mountains, it is rumored there is the key to a colossal tower. This tower is not simply a large building, however. Within its walls are rumored to be the very roots of the dark magic which I have so long sought to be the omnipotent master of. The Shadow Clan will compare to fleas in the face of the mighty beasts that I may raise upon entering this tower. The Griffon said to guard the kingdom that has replaced my own will cower in fear at what lies within those walls. From the mighty Leviathan to the invincible Bahamut, everything will be within my reach.

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