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PokePrash The Story Behind the Success

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Jerry:
I liked it but yes, I didn't know what was the first paragraph's link with the rest and I initially thought that the main character was watching television until he was awoken :P

I'll be looking forward for the next parts of the episodes.

Oh one thing, right. If you feel that you rushed somewhere, don't rush next time. Take your time to make it better :)

partyprash:
Thanks Jerry :)
very much, im really not a confident writer cuz my english in sot too good, but i try :) thanks for the feedback.
lol, i wouldnt have made it him watching tv or anything, lol its too similar to pokemon season 1 episode 1 lol :)

zylonnick:
keep writing, it can be a nice story

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