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LeoReborn:
Pt 4
Twisted Heart
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I feel a Love/Hate thing going on. I love her. She hates me.

I was tutoring some kids younger than me, after school. I liked it, it gave me something to do, and I felt good knowing I was helping others. I as on my way home when I saw her. She was walking in front of me, then she almost half-cringed, half-tripped. She spun around, and gave me a glare, "What is your Problem?"

With a confused smile, "I'm going home, not that I'd consider that a problem."
"You follow me everywhere!"
"You think so? Maybe I just happen to have something to do, and its not like we are separated by a mountain. We live across from each other."
"So that gives you an excuse to stalk me?"
"I don't stalk people. Believe me, I don't."
"Whatever, I was right about you."
"If you hate me that much, I can take a different route, say...off a cliffside."
"Look, I don't like you, but I don't want you dead."
"Ok then, I'll just go the usual way, this way."

Viper:
Is it really necessary to make a whole new thread each time? Cant you limit it all to one thread?

LeoReborn:
I find it easier, instead of hunting through the thread to find it, its at the top.

Viper:
Well then just make a new thread and reserve how many spots you want.

Jerry:
And... you could make the little parts a little longer... like merging part 3 and 4 wouldn't hurt... escpecially if you made them close enough, referring to time.

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