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Aristos:
It's pretty interesting.

I like it how you grab the reader's attention by using a good description instead of using most dialogue from most people who make a story. Usually they would fill the whole story with dialogue. It doesn't really show what's happening in the story.

But your words feels like you're bringing the story to life! If I was a teacher I would probably get someone to publish this. :]

~Aristos

DayStar:
Errm, thanks - Thanks Alot! :) :D

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