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Trip in Time

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Blaze:

--- Quote from: spirit on January 23, 2010, 10:39:18 PM ---there were i think 2 grammatical errors i found while reading it

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Please tell, I can edit it, I won't be able to live without knowing what I spelt wrong lol

DayStar:

--- Quote from: NinjaBlaze on January 23, 2010, 09:57:36 PM ---None of them seemed particularly interested me,
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That's one I noticed - can't see any others though...

Blaze:

--- Quote from: DayStar on January 23, 2010, 10:53:54 PM ---
--- Quote from: NinjaBlaze on January 23, 2010, 09:57:36 PM ---None of them seemed particularly interested me,
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That's one I noticed - can't see any others though...

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Ah, edited it. None of them seemed particularly interested IN me...

I actually think it was MSWord that did that  :-\

spirit:

--- Quote --- I blinked a few times, allowing my eyes adjust to the light of the
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i believe it should say "allowing my eyes to adjust to the light"




--- Quote --- The lucky few that had foreseen the earth’s fate and had bunkered underground, and started a civilisation there.
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sentence fragment

Jerry:
Not bad and it deserves your A*. Keep up with the news and you'll do very well in the upcoming years :)

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