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Declan_23:
Haha, I may carry on sometime in the future, but I doubt it. Seriously though, ask away :)

Jerry:
Lol, you're not forced to answer them, but since you asked for them ;)

The prologue is quite confusing. I thought that you would have explained later in the chapters, but since you are no more writing it...
- What was Wolf doing there? Some movement against the dictator I'd guess at this point.
- Did the killed man had the same purpose?
- The people were happy about something, somehow, the government or the people were happy that the man was now dead?

Did you plan them to succeed in their task, that is fighting fascist and racist dictators?
Are those fascist and racist dictators not doing anything to bring down their opponents?
I should take it that Tiger is quite new herself?
Did you plan something further than friendship between Tiger and Wolf?
What happens after the little 'testing' martial arts session? Wolf gets trained further? Does he help Tiger too?
Does Wolf finally get used to using firearms more than his martial arts talents?

I wondered if you would put even more characters in the story, and how many animal names there would be :P

I have to go now, maybe more questions will pop in later ;D

Declan_23:
Woaaah, okay. I'll try my best.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---The prologue is quite confusing. I thought that you would have explained later in the chapters, but since you are no more writing it...
- What was Wolf doing there? Some movement against the dictator I'd guess at this point.
- Did the killed man had the same purpose?
- The people were happy about something, somehow, the government or the people were happy that the man was now dead?

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The prologue is set a about 4 or 5 years before the main narrative. This was when the dictators first came to power. The idea was that the general public rose up against them and won a major riot. However, after this (This bit was going to become clear later) they used their superior firepower to crush the public and the rebels were forced to move underground.
The killed man was rioting against the government like most of the public, however, his death was unrelated to the end of the riot. The people were happy because they thought they'd won.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---Did you plan them to succeed in their task, that is fighting fascist and racist dictators?

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The end was going to be a cliff-hanger after a botched rescue attempt. The majority of the rebels aside from Wolf would die.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---Are those fascist and racist dictators not doing anything to bring down their opponents?

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That's a good question, they had no official opponents, only underground rebels. They had the British Fascist League (based on Hitler's SA) to try and act as an alternative police force. With which the rebels would occasionally clash.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---I should take it that Tiger is quite new herself?

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Yes, she'd joined only a few weeks before Wolf.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---Did you plan something further than friendship between Tiger and Wolf?

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Yeah, they were going to paired up as partners. Just before Tiger died at the end, Wolf was going to admit his feelings for her.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---What happens after the little 'testing' martial arts session? Wolf gets trained further? Does he help Tiger too?

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Sensei Burnside does train them a little further, however, my own knowledge of unarmed combat is limited to judo and so this would have made it hard for me to describe the training in much detail.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---Does Wolf finally get used to using firearms more than his martial arts talents?

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Although they were both equipped with rifles, Tiger was always going to be the better, and Wolf better with everything else. As they were going to be paired together, I thought it would nicely balance them out.


--- Quote from: Jerry on March 26, 2011, 12:30:56 PM ---I wondered if you would put even more characters in the story, and how many animal names there would be :P

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The only other main character would have been the fascist leader who would have had a normal name. I tried to give the characters animal names to reflect their personality and background.

Jerry:
Nice, I think that covers it all and no more questions for you luckily :P The next chapters could describe many battles, the start of their jobs together, after each working with a different partner maybe to get some field experience, then getting and losing some bases, and later on the final battle where all but Wolf die. Yes, I think that'd be interesting when elaborated. Well, I have the big picture now, so thanks! ;D

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