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Jerry:
Yes, very good, apart from the shade which is too dark. A lighter tone would just make it  :)

I'll number the images 1, 2, 3, etc.

1. Front shadow of columns can stop earlier, for example, follow the shade they project on the wall. (where the shade stops on the wall, stop the shade on the ground too)

2-5. I think that removing the shade from the bottom of the front walls would be better. Same note as 1, for no. 5 concerning the shade made by the left part of the building.

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