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TrainerX:
 Writing is an art, so when she said artwork I think she was talking about her story, not drawings and stuff.

Jerry:
That was enjoying to read, I'll be looking forward for the next chapters :)

zylonnick:
This was really a really good story that got me hooked from the beginning. We want more!!!

genbor:
It's too short... (take that as a compliment :D)
                                                                Cheers, Genbor

Yume Tsuki:
Chapter 2

"Just you wait until my friends are here. They pick up scents easily" Yume said pitiful to David. He grinned a bit. "Did you notice something when you were among them?" "Huh... What do you mean?" "I mean just to say, because you have improved smell abilities too, notice one thing about them." This made Yume think for a bit, then she had a shocked look on her face. "I guess you know what I meant now. Dremacies are scentless." David said. He saw a desperate look on her face. At first she was relaxed when she had the idea that she would be rescued by a search party. But now there seemed doubt and despair on her face.
Many days passed and Yume seemed to have lost her hope. Getting no news from the outside world was frustrating. "Damn those humans." She cursed. There was no oppurtinity to escape. Even with her potentials. If it was dinnertime they turned on a gravity flip mechanism, letting her 'fall' against the ceiling of her prison so they could peacefully put the food in the room. Themselves had special suits that were immume for this sudden gravity change. With a bored face the gaurd closed the door, it seems that it was something he did all day long. Yume saw him forgetting to put the safety lock on the door and releasing her from the twisted Gravity. She waited until the gaurd left the room. She grinned.
With a gentle push she opened the door. She carefully looked around. There were no people around. So she started making a run for it. Just one problem was in her mind: "Where is the exit..." She whispered to herself. She saw two guys just walking by this made her a bit shocked so she made an agile U-turn and went back the other way as fast as she can. The guys were just watching her in a questionable way. Yume ran at a high pace taking random directions on each crossway. And each time she saw anyone she turned right around going the other way. Finally at one point to bump into a guy along with him were David and the Girl from before. "Stay back, I'm violent!" Yume shouted. "Really?" David said sarcastic. "Just you wait, and see me, transform in a Dremacy at complete daytime!" "Oh, that's even more intresting..." David answered. He was thinking that it would be a bluff. But to his suprise Yume suddently jumped and in a swift blur seems to have jumped over his head. When he turned around Yume was already out of sight.

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