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Author Topic: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/17/11 Nidoking WIP  (Read 51919 times)

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 06/25/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #45 on: June 26, 2011, 06:07:31 AM »
Thanks, guys. ;w;
I know he looks kinda wonky, but hopefully when I add some shading and lines it'll look much better. How about the pose though? Think its good enough? D: Anything I should change now, in the early stages, any color correction?

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 06/25/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #46 on: June 26, 2011, 12:33:21 PM »
the design from pikachu is good, now it just needs some lining, shading etc (where are the black parts from his ears/his nails?). The yellow needs to be a bit darker though, and the brown on his tail/back needs to be a bit darker too. But that is just when I compare him next to the series (nitpicks). You're really good at this. Keep on the good work.
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 06/25/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #47 on: June 27, 2011, 02:25:31 AM »
Thank you, Ponge! :D
The reason it probably all looks lighter is because I've been using Ken Sugimori's official artwork for my color pallettes instead of the sprites or the anime. This can easily be changed though. :]
The black parts will also be added. Was planning on it. xD

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #48 on: July 01, 2011, 10:20:31 PM »
Ok! More Pikachu. Not super thrilled with it, but its progressing. Any tips?

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #49 on: July 01, 2011, 10:38:57 PM »
The way his face bends seems odd. It doesn't seem to be the shape of a head.

Other, then that. Great!
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #50 on: July 02, 2011, 04:30:38 AM »
I suggest you move his left red cheek thingy more inwards, then smooth out the bulge straight.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #51 on: July 02, 2011, 05:27:03 AM »
i liked eevee and meowth but pikachu is not as good as meowth and eevee were.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #52 on: July 02, 2011, 09:56:48 AM »
 He looks pretty good... Maybe I should let Pikachu join the GENBOR4LIFE organization as a foot soldier. Since we need a lot of those.

PS: Make his electricity generators on his cheek a bit more red?
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #53 on: July 02, 2011, 10:24:45 AM »
i agree with genbor

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #54 on: July 02, 2011, 11:44:24 AM »
 Welcome to GENBOR4LIFE DarkknighT good to have you. Also Pikachu looks fierce as always.
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #55 on: July 02, 2011, 11:50:46 AM »
Something that's throwing me is his arms - they need to be separated or made skinny :3

Other than that, awesome!
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #56 on: July 02, 2011, 11:52:00 AM »
 Yeah L5Pidgey you're right... his arm does seem way too thick.
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/01/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #57 on: July 02, 2011, 03:49:41 PM »
i agree,again.its forelimbs are way too thick.except its cheeks and limbs its awesome.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #58 on: July 05, 2011, 02:18:33 AM »
Alrighty. Updated Pikachu. I took everything y'all said into consideration and I hope this version is much improved! I also put a notice up about critiques. I LOVE getting critique, but just posting: "I don't like it" Is not going to make it better. :/

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #59 on: July 05, 2011, 03:23:25 AM »
It looks a lot better, but the arm still looks a bit fat.

Using my incredible Paint.NET skills, I have constructed an image of what could possibly fix it. (I'm not a very good artist, so feel free to ignore me :D)