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[OOCC] Pokemon X-Fusion
Robbase231:
OK, first thing I noticed about this R.P
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much filler
If you real through the R.P, it really drags, almost to the point that you would not want to join
What ever your story, you need to introduce an element that the R.P'ers can interact with.
My request is give me something to R.P WITH, at this point I am dealing with a bunch of empty towns with nothing going on, human interaction with the story only does so much
NexosYourGayBestFriend96:
Question for you: because I'm new at owning an RP, does that mean I need to describe the sise of populations and mabye add certain details to the RP and it's area's, like mabye add actual organizations inside the region? Is that what you mean? Because if not can you be a bit more descriptive, because I've only done this once before, and when I did I failed miserably.
Robbase231:
--- Quote from: Lugiafan96 on October 28, 2011, 12:16:40 AM ---Question for you: because I'm new at owning an RP, does that mean I need to describe the sise of populations and mabye add certain details to the RP and it's area's, like mabye add actual organizations inside the region? Is that what you mean? Because if not can you be a bit more descriptive, because I've only done this once before, and when I did I failed miserably.
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Your on the right track, Think about video games for a second. When you play them, they introduce you to the mechanics of the game, then pit you against some easy low level creatures, finally giving you your objective for the rest of the game (beat X guy/organization, save X girl/boy, Find X amount of stuff, ect)
If you read what you have so far it is something like this
Hi
how are you
Im fine
want to battle?
sure
player does X attack
response from other player
repeat until done
well that was great
yes it was
ok then have a nice day
you too
there was no confict, no opposing sides, even though they were fighting one another there was nothing too it, nothing to make a reader say "hey I want to join in"
Put a bad guy in there, someone to stir things up and make people focus on, make him hard to beat
Also I would include an opposition to your whole X-fusion thing, like there are protesters n'stuff
Think about it, what would PETA say if you fused with your dog to just battle someone?
NexosYourGayBestFriend96:
Hmmm... what If I put something in the introduction about the main antanganists and a objective for the RP?
Also about the PETA thing, funny thoughts. ::)
Robbase231:
--- Quote from: Lugiafan96 on October 28, 2011, 01:04:53 AM ---Hmmm... what If I put something in the introduction about the main antanganists and a objective for the RP?
Also about the PETA thing, funny thoughts. ::)
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If you do that, SHOW it, like right now the characters seem to be in the main city, make some noise right around there and we could have something to work with
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