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[Story] Pokemon's end with the King of Pokemons

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Tickles:
All I can ask is, what is the whole plot of this? I have read a lot in my life, and this is completely jumbled. I'm sure you put a lot of thought into this, but might I suggest taking the time to sit back, brainstorm your ideas, then after you have the best in the list, place them on a time chart so you know what comes in first, what comes in next, when they come in, wht events are taking place, where is it, and who is part of it. This is the backbone of story writing, the way you write it is what makes the difference between a great story and a bad story.

Deion1:
Thats what they teach in high school

CelaGhost:
I love it!
You just need to organize it better cause the dialogue and sometimes the plain writing.. is confusing.
You need to edit your story cause the grammar sucks...

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