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[OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
Tickles:
I know, and it's always a good idea to have one. Microsoft word has a good one, but you can add things to your dictionary. Google chrome automatically checks your spelling, so if you're strapped for cash, I would go with that.
Hank:
--- Quote from: Cortex J. on January 21, 2012, 03:41:44 AM ---I know, and it's always a good idea to have one. Microsoft word has a good one, but you can add things to your dictionary. Google chrome automatically checks your spelling, so if you're strapped for cash, I would go with that.
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A quick Google search can get you a free grammar/spell checker. All you have to do is download it.
EDIT: I'm ready for a time change.
Tickles:
Im going to take a good guess and say everyone is ready for a time change. Time to move this forward. Remember, Utopia will have a weather barrier that prevents rain and the like from affecting the streets. The central area is basically shielded from this as well, but can get flooded. Every other area will be affected differently, it will start over utopia, and move South East. The western part is going to be seeing patches of sun, but no rain. Just remember that and you guys will be fine.
Hank:
--- Quote from: shin21 on January 21, 2012, 08:21:15 PM ---
--- Quote from: Cortex J. on January 21, 2012, 06:11:52 PM ---@Aqua
A small boy approaches the smith, a little shaky. He had seen her once before when his father went in for some suit repairs. He had but one question.
Excuse me, but my father brought his metal armor in. I had a teddy bear with me, but I lost him. Did he fall in your store?
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Axyl starts walking out of the stadium seeying the boy was going to be busy, then she sees a small boy going to her asking about a teddy bear
"a teddy bear.... um..."
she thinks a bit but doesnt remenber any teddy bear, she then looks down at the small boy and gives a gentle smile
"tell you what... you come back with me to the shop, and we will look for it, how about it?"
extends her hand to him so the boy would give her his hand
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Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.
Aquashin:
--- Quote from: RocksEvo on January 21, 2012, 08:32:13 PM ---
Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.
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when cortex talked to me about the posts, it was about the size of the posts, not grammar, i mean, your only complaining about the periods at the end of the sentences, which in my opinion its a realy small thing to be noticed, see for yourself:
--- Quote from: Cortex J. on January 21, 2012, 03:04:18 AM ---Double post for a reason: Aqua, I forgot to mention, you broke the posting rule quite a few times. In know you were writing out a battle, but you could have put a little more. Since I forgot to mention it before, I'm going to count this as one warning. Remember, the minimum is 4 complete sentences, which is not that much.
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