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[OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
Hank:
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--- Quote from: RocksEvo on January 21, 2012, 08:32:13 PM ---
Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.
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when cortex talked to me about the posts, it was about the size of the posts, not grammar, i mean, your only complaining about the periods at the end of the sentences, which in my opinion its a realy small thing to be noticed, see for yourself:
--- Quote from: Cortex J. on January 21, 2012, 03:04:18 AM ---Double post for a reason: Aqua, I forgot to mention, you broke the posting rule quite a few times. In know you were writing out a battle, but you could have put a little more. Since I forgot to mention it before, I'm going to count this as one warning. Remember, the minimum is 4 complete sentences,
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http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,4098.msg96978/topicseen.html#new *looks at rule 3*
I think I have made my case.
Aquashin:
--- Quote from: RocksEvo on January 21, 2012, 09:27:23 PM ---
http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,4098.msg96978/topicseen.html#new *looks at rule 3*
I think I have made my case.
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Whatever floats your boat... if it is such a big deal to everyone that i only don't put periods in the end of the sentences, then i will starting my next post...
If it is a big deal to everyone else, pleasse speak up, because no one until now (you) said anything about it.
Ayara012:
I really don't see it as a huge deal. I mean, having correct punctuation can be nice, but as long as it's readable i see no problem. I think we should all just stop arguing. If Cortex thinks it's against the rules, he'll say so, and that will be that.
Darkstar64:
--- Quote from: RocksEvo on January 21, 2012, 09:27:23 PM ---
--- Quote from: shin21 on January 21, 2012, 09:10:38 PM ---
--- Quote from: RocksEvo on January 21, 2012, 08:32:13 PM ---
Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.
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when cortex talked to me about the posts, it was about the size of the posts, not grammar, i mean, your only complaining about the periods at the end of the sentences, which in my opinion its a realy small thing to be noticed, see for yourself:
--- Quote from: Cortex J. on January 21, 2012, 03:04:18 AM ---Double post for a reason: Aqua, I forgot to mention, you broke the posting rule quite a few times. In know you were writing out a battle, but you could have put a little more. Since I forgot to mention it before, I'm going to count this as one warning. Remember, the minimum is 4 complete sentences,
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http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,4098.msg96978/topicseen.html#new *looks at rule 3*
I think I have made my case.
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No, I think you're just finding a reason to complain. The lack of periods at the end of sentences hasn't seemed to affect anyone else, and it looks like you're trying to get her in trouble over a technicality.
Hank:
Let us be honest here, it does not matter what our opinions are. At the end of the day, Shin21 broke the rules multiple times, and kept doing it after a warning.
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