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nightshade06:

--- Quote from: lubbies on May 24, 2012, 06:27:40 PM ---HURRY LIGHT OUT THAT FIRE ON HIS HEAD!... jks the jacket looks a bit pale on the left of the frontal view 1 and 2 on the side views theres that wierd shininess going around the ear that looks a bit out of place but overall it's great (although could use a little more shading) Not bad for your 2nd try and the eyes dont look right, look at the front page for reference.

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Lawls that was the first thing I thought about when I posted it on here..Was that he looked like he was on fire..XD

Also can you explain what you mean by shiny? XD I don't see it.

lubbies:


Well that's my opinion.

nightshade06:
Before







After



I hope I fixed it XD haha



After After....lol


(edit) Fixed what I seen on the pants  Gunna submit that last one as my final lol I am too new at it to make it perfect :P

lubbies:
Better but still a tiny bit funny. The jackets shades don't meld that well, either find darker colors to suit the outside or lighter ones for the interior, I only noticed this now but the standing back views pants look very strange. The jackets arms look too much like the skin color. I must say though it looks much better. ;)

nightshade06:

--- Quote from: lubbies on May 24, 2012, 08:03:43 PM ---Better but still a tiny bit funny. The jackets shades don't meld that well, either find darker colors to suit the outside or lighter ones for the interior, I only noticed this now but the standing back views pants look very strange. The jackets arms look too much like the skin color. I must say though it looks much better. ;)

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Now that you mention that on the back view standing one yea you are right it is odd...lol

Ok I edited it again I still see a few things wrong with my pants but didn't notice till after I posted it but yea the most distinct thing you will see I changed is his hair....Lol....I was sitting there thinking what was wrong with this sprite then it hit me....There sure was a crap load of orange on him...Soooooo I changed it :P

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