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Title: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on March 31, 2011, 07:44:06 AM
Variations of first model :

(http://i1134.photobucket.com/albums/m605/tenric/2floors-1.png)

(http://i1134.photobucket.com/albums/m605/tenric/3floors-1.png)

(http://i1134.photobucket.com/albums/m605/tenric/small-1.png)

I haven't made any progress with the windows. It's a steep learning curve, but I'll work on it.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Monzta on March 31, 2011, 07:50:27 AM
Oh my god... they are undescribably good!
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Mr. Fox on March 31, 2011, 11:17:25 AM
you did those your self?! wow...
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: TrainerX on March 31, 2011, 01:46:06 PM
Those are f*cking awesome
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on March 31, 2011, 02:42:30 PM
These are indeed very nice sketches, however there are some things you must keep in mind.
- You have to measure them in our tile dimension (48^2). I don't think the door will fit our characters for instance.
- Submitted work should be complete. Otherwise you're fully welcome to make a normal art thread if you want feedback or ideas. :)

Other than that.
Keep up the good work.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on March 31, 2011, 05:50:32 PM
Don't worry about the 72DPI too much. Normal screen graphics = 72DPI.

As for that grid. if those boxes are 48x48 pixels, then you should know that one and a half of those boxes is normal for a door, since the character sprite is 48x48.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on March 31, 2011, 11:45:20 PM
re-edited
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Mr. Fox on March 31, 2011, 11:47:28 PM
wow. those are cool.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: St. Jimmy on March 31, 2011, 11:53:14 PM
Nice work ;)
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on April 01, 2011, 12:08:52 AM
Great work!
But, this is still too big.
if you look here:
(http://p1cture.it/images/10752672701599638967.png)

Compared to the tiles used in game
(http://pokemon-universe.com/dump/prebeta_ss2.png)

Also, remember that tiles are like blocks. You should make a symetric art with repeated tiles to save game file space.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on April 01, 2011, 02:59:34 AM
re-edited
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Jerry on April 01, 2011, 06:18:07 PM
Nice work :)

Only thing which I find strange are the storeys, they seem to be much smaller, especially for the middle storeys. Attics are small, yes... but storeys?
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on April 01, 2011, 10:03:36 PM
Now we're talking. Great work! :)
(http://p1cture.it/images/03639359522883415100.png)

However, it looks a little bit misplaced in our line of graphics. Adding a few more details and such to the house will help a lot.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Jerry on April 02, 2011, 08:58:52 AM
Um... couple of more things to point out.

Try inserting shadow on the walls just below the roof.
The shadows for the two right columns don't match those of the left columns. Try making the shadows all on the right of the columns?
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on April 05, 2011, 06:15:03 AM
re-edited
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Amphi on April 05, 2011, 06:58:39 AM
very awesome!
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: baralai15 on April 05, 2011, 11:10:59 AM
what program did you use to make this if you dont mind me asking?
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on April 05, 2011, 01:59:20 PM
I use the free version of GraphicsGale. It can be found here :

http://www.humanbalance.net/gale/us/
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on April 05, 2011, 05:41:32 PM
Approved. Waiting for team input.
Keep up the good work.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Markisa on April 05, 2011, 06:52:33 PM
Those are really good ;)
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Urmel on April 05, 2011, 07:19:42 PM
/me likes
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Mr. Fox on April 05, 2011, 07:21:42 PM
That is the house I want!
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: tenric on April 06, 2011, 06:35:03 AM
Added some variations of my first model.
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Kamaran on April 06, 2011, 08:51:25 AM
The left part of the last-right one looks a bit weird  :o
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Baka on April 06, 2011, 12:39:13 PM
As kamaran stated. The right part of the top roof shading is either too wide or too dark.
Great work though. :)
Title: Re: Tenric's graphic submissions
Post by: Jerry on April 06, 2011, 05:41:44 PM
Yes, very good, apart from the shade which is too dark. A lighter tone would just make it  :)

I'll number the images 1, 2, 3, etc.

1. Front shadow of columns can stop earlier, for example, follow the shade they project on the wall. (where the shade stops on the wall, stop the shade on the ground too)

2-5. I think that removing the shade from the bottom of the front walls would be better. Same note as 1, for no. 5 concerning the shade made by the left part of the building.