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Pokémon Universe => Jobs => Topic started by: baralai15 on March 25, 2010, 04:18:11 AM
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I didn't really know where to put this since I would like to learn and become a mapper eventually so i thought here would be good.
Well I just finished this map and its my first ever so please be honest and give me some tips :)
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You sure this is the first map you made, because it looks pretty good (compared to other "first" maps I've seen).
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Yes in all honesty and I am 100% sure that this is my first map. I just decided to try it out. It's pretty fun but I wanted to add detail instead of throwing in random things and I saw the other maps and used peoples tips to create mine. All I need now is other peoples suggestions to improve them.
I plan on making another one later on tonight so i have a variety of maps any suggestions of what kind I should make? Maybe an actual city, route, cave, idk yet.
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Aside from the hedges behind the pokecenter, which look like they are floating next to the roof, everything looks pretty good.
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Pretty good mate. The one thing I would say (and it's a bit picky) is that all of the grass you have is in perfect squares. If you removed a couple of squares (say like 5) in random places it should look a little bit better :)
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Aside from the hedges behind the pokecenter, which look like they are floating next to the roof, everything looks pretty good.
Lol yea i was going to remove them but I guess i forgot, thanks for the suggestion :)
Pretty good mate. The one thing I would say (and it's a bit picky) is that all of the grass you have is in perfect squares. If you removed a couple of squares (say like 5) in random places it should look a little bit better :)
Alright, I will do that, do i put anything else in those empty spots or do I just leave them grass?
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hey bralai15 the map seems very awesome gratz, and are the sprites of Heart Gold /Soul Silver out so you can use them ???
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Thanks and Im not quite sure lol I just found this map editor yesterday so Im going to test it out and create a couple more maps.
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you should trying making a city similar to phenic city in the orre region can be called new phenic city
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Made another map, well not totally finished. I want to see what people think I should add or remove please help out ;)
you should trying making a city similar to phenic city in the orre region can be called new phenic city
Sure you got the exact picture of phenic city? and I'll try my best lol
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its Full with mistakes ...
but its good as A 1ST MAP .... mapping needs just practicing
If you want really learn mapping i advice you too satart with routes
this site may help you :
http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokers/index.html
try to copy ... it will learn you many new Mapping trix
this is a map made by me :
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8161/r104.png
and yeah if you don t have a pleasure in mapping than don t ...
hope i helpped with somthing ...
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its Full with mistakes ...
but its good as A 1ST MAP .... mapping needs just practicing
If you want really learn mapping i advice you too satart with routes
this site may help you :
http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokers/index.html
try to copy ... it will learn you many new Mapping trix
this is a map made by me :
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8161/r104.png
and yeah if you don t have a pleasure in mapping than don t ...
hope i helpped with somthing ...
Thanks for the advice, but can you tell me what the mistakes are? Thats what I am looking for most please ;)
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well ...
- no grass in cities (safe palce)
- that s not the good way to use the flowred grass xD
- trees are randomly organized
- you don t use the right wood panels
- some tiles a randomly used
- you used some interies tiles (that must used jusr for inside houses)
- http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5273/1stmap.png
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advise you to use this program : http://www.box.net/shared/ndanq0vk8c
it s better (i used it when i was a beginner )
hope that helps too ....
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http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Phenac_City
phenac city i doubt you'll be able to make it it would probably need brand new tiles made lol but i wish i could convince one of the mappers for pu to add it to the game ^ ^
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well ...
- no grass in cities (safe palce)
- that s not the good way to use the flowred grass xD
- trees are randomly organized
- you don t use the right wood panels
- some tiles a randomly used
- you used some interies tiles (that must used jusr for inside houses)
- http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5273/1stmap.png
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advise you to use this program : http://www.box.net/shared/ndanq0vk8c
it s better (i used it when i was a beginner )
hope that helps too ....
-Well you could have grass but just no pokemon in it.
-Yea I figured the flowered grass was a little different lol
-Trees arent really even in real life right? But I think I know what you mean?
-What wood panels do you mean?
-What are the random tiles and yea I know some are for inside places but they looked good lol.
Overall thank you for your feedback :)
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- the white wood panels
- well the rocks.. the intories tiles.. the grass balls
i say this things to you cause you have the tallent just ... you need just some training
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- the white wood panels
- well the rocks.. the intories tiles.. the grass balls
i say this things to you cause you have the tallent just ... you need just some training
The hell are you talking about, and where are your maps Mr. Expert?
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Sent to [email protected] and later put under declined.
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Thanks for your support and for the job thing, I didnt think I was ready to submit it yet lol thats why I got declined so in the future maybe.
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some maps made by me :
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
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some maps made by me :
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
wow maybe you should try to make your own ^ ^
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Lol kamaran nice edit on that post ;)
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Your first two maps looks good. I didn't find any major mistakes in them. Just clean up on the minor stuff and your third map will be even better. Don't disappoint me, I see potential in you!
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lol thanks but what minor stuff? i would like to know and i will be making a third map sometime this weekend.
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some maps made by me :
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
wow maybe you should try to make your own ^ ^
sure xD :
-Simple route :http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2197/neoswork.png
-Simple city : http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9706/neoswork2.png
-Simple cave :http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3932/neoswork3.png
and what do you think ?
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http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9706/neoswork2.png What's up with the filing cabinet next to the house? :S
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they are Boxes xD
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some maps made by me :
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
- Owned by others
wow maybe you should try to make your own ^ ^
sure xD :
-Simple route :http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2197/neoswork.png
-Simple city : http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9706/neoswork2.png
-Simple cave :http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/3932/neoswork3.png
and what do you think ?
lol nice those look pretty good ^ ^ and i just posted that because well it said exactly what was in quote wasn't meaning to be a jerk
here's a few of my pieces:
New Abelia Town possible starting town for new trainers
(http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n69/cmcoauette/New%20Pokemon%20Region/NewAbeliaTown.png)
Grass is just there for looks, doesn't actually hold any wild pokemon,
northern route of above town
(http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n69/cmcoauette/New%20Pokemon%20Region/NewRoute1.png)
disclaimer: tiles were made by Wesley FG of pokecommunity
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looks good need just some flowers
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looks good need just some flowers
yea i would've put flowers but of course he did tile any and since im too lazy to tile my own, yea not happening lol i do though have a little project i wanna do ^ ^, mentioned earlier in this thread
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I was bored, so I thought I would get on the map-train and fiddle for a few hours...This is what I came up with. Let me know what you all think. If it sucks it sucks :P
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I was bored, so I thought I would get on the map-train and fiddle for a few hours...This is what I came up with. Let me know what you all think. If it sucks it sucks :P
i like it, one thing that bugs me is the stairs in the top left corner, usually if you have stairs you wanna also have some sort of ledge so you can tell that the stairs are actually bringing you up, or in some cases down.
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I was bored, so I thought I would get on the map-train and fiddle for a few hours...This is what I came up with. Let me know what you all think. If it sucks it sucks :P
Constributors won't be flamed. However I saw some errors. (link (http://p1cture.it/images/arb9w9y9qv811g2x4x0y.jpg))
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I was bored, so I thought I would get on the map-train and fiddle for a few hours...This is what I came up with. Let me know what you all think. If it sucks it sucks :P
Constributors won't be flamed. However I saw some errors. (link (http://p1cture.it/images/arb9w9y9qv811g2x4x0y.jpg))
I talked to Stephen about the grass, fence and stairs. Easy enough to fix. The tile I missed at the bottom right I actually just forgot to re-angle up. If those are the only things I screwed up I'm satisfied with myself for the first time even using the app lol.
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I think it looks great, but I'll give you the advice that someone told me about city maps too.
You should not leave the grass in the city because it's a safe-zone, as there should not be a threat *in this case...pokemon*
Pretty much it looks great, but the truth is that you *should*...not *have* replace the grass with something else =)...other than that it looks great.
THIS IS TO THE ORIGINAL TOPIC PICTURE!!!!
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I revised the map a bit. Hopefully it's a bit better than the last.
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I revised the map a bit. Hopefully it's a bit better than the last.
much better, i like it lol so whats in the cave? a shrine, or maybe someone's home
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If I can get around to doing it, it is a pokemon cave that leads to a tomb of a dead famous trainer
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You forgot to delete the sign thats in between the two stores(you have another near the right entrance). I can totally see a huge difference once you changed what kamaran pointed out. Made it look a lot more cleaner and better looking town.
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You forgot to delete the sign thats in between the two stores.
I don't see any need to remove the sign? It references the fountain behind it. The sign at the right entrance/exit and left entrance/exit of the town are indicators of what area you would be entering if you were to go either east or west.
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You forgot to delete the sign thats in between the two stores.
I don't see any need to remove the sign? It references the fountain behind it. The sign at the right entrance/exit and left entrance/exit of the town are indicators of what area you would be entering if you were to go either east or west.
now that i look at it could it be the fact that the fence is connected to the sign?
also the corners at the bottom fenced in area have pieces of fence hanging off too
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Man what a great map i hope they use it for the game!
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My file for some reason got deleted off of box so now I'm just updating all the links. Hope you don't mind.
http://www.box.net/shared/cah0v7z1j5
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florence, putting a teeny tiny cave in an urban town is a little bit weird. An OP, there's no tall grass in towns.
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it looks good as of a first map but the fencing is a bit off...
but other than that i think it looks great ;)
old thread revived.
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