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Pokémon Universe => Jobs => Topic started by: dudethatsmyapple on November 20, 2010, 07:26:18 AM

Title: My first map.
Post by: dudethatsmyapple on November 20, 2010, 07:26:18 AM
please tell me if i should use this town for my game....
my first map i made when i was almost 11 :D
(http://i52.tinypic.com/2e1vgu9.jpg)
Ive have been told alot i have great potental for mapping.
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: Jerry on November 20, 2010, 08:53:01 AM
To be honest... I don't like it that much... it seems... unreal... :-\

Apart from the boat, I don't see any particular mistake, except maybe those strange white squares on doors, postage box, etc
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: partyprash on November 20, 2010, 03:49:54 PM
a little too simple
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: Kamaran on November 20, 2010, 03:56:07 PM
please tell me if i should use this town for my game....

No.
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: LeoReborn on November 20, 2010, 06:09:10 PM

Ive have been told alot i have great potental for mapping.

no offense..... work on a more realistic map, try recreating a map of a pokemon game..... start with Verdanturf Town, its small, and a good place to start.
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: dudethatsmyapple on November 20, 2010, 06:55:06 PM
To be honest... I don't like it that much... it seems... unreal... :-\

Apart from the boat, I don't see any particular mistake, except maybe those strange white squares on doors, postage box, etc
those sqaures are events for going in doors etc.

and ill try making them more realistic
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: Amphi on November 22, 2010, 09:52:33 PM
as many other have said, it's way to simple.
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: dudethatsmyapple on November 24, 2010, 11:49:35 PM
yea, but what more could you have asked from a 9 year old :P
now that im older i can do maps better...
ill try to get a post of one up later
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: thrasher08 on November 29, 2010, 10:28:22 PM
I think it's good a bit basic yes but you know this is all free so you can't blame him for a good attempt well done and also what software is he using thanks for your patience :-\
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: NexosYourGayBestFriend96 on December 05, 2010, 11:25:38 PM
Well i like the map, but as others said its a little too simple, mabye you could just add a few more buildings but thats just my opinion, other than that its actualy pretty good. :)
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: hawkeye on December 26, 2010, 06:49:29 AM
if i may make a suggestion,

1) what is the aim for the place, is it suppose to be a small town, or just a little place off the beaten path, from there if its a town, beef up the community a bit more

2) with the simple look, add a little bit of a challenge like in the first gen, there was a hidden item hidden,

with hat being said, really great job it looks nice and simple but as said before could use some touch ups
Title: Re: My first map.
Post by: partyprash on December 26, 2010, 04:03:53 PM
re-looking at it, i dont think that the problem is simplicity,

I just think the buildings and stuff are too sparse for it being a city/town