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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 22, 2012, 12:09:55 AM »
Yea... I clearly act almighty. I apologize for being very unethical. I was the immature person, and I can understand Shin21 more than I let on. Once again, I apologize.
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Cortex-
Thank you for answering me.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 11:17:10 PM »
So you are refusing to translate your last post?

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 10:55:02 PM »
All I want for you is to realize that you are making too many mistakes. Please try to improve.

Excuse me? Too many mistakes? Can you anme each mistake i made?
I certainly can, but that is too much of a tedious task to do.

Or is it just one that made alot of times that no one seems to care?
I'm sorry, what?

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 09:55:33 PM »
I do want to know what i did to make you so hostile torwards me, but i won't ask, try to make Cortex kick me off the thread then.
All I want for you is to realize that you are making too many mistakes. Please try to improve.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 09:46:07 PM »
Let us be honest here, it does not matter what our opinions are. At the end of the day, Shin21 broke the rules multiple times, and kept doing it after a warning.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 09:27:23 PM »

Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.


when cortex talked to me about the posts, it was about the size of the posts, not grammar, i mean, your only complaining about the periods at the end of the sentences, which in my opinion its a realy small thing to be noticed, see for yourself:

Double post for a reason: Aqua, I forgot to mention, you broke the posting rule quite a few times. In know you were writing out a battle, but you could have put a little more. Since I forgot to mention it before, I'm going to count this as one warning. Remember, the minimum is 4 complete sentences,
http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,4098.msg96978/topicseen.html#new *looks at rule 3*
I think I have made my case.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 08:32:13 PM »
@Aqua
A small boy approaches the smith, a little shaky. He had seen her once before when his father went in for some suit repairs. He had but one question.

Excuse me, but my father brought his metal armor in. I had a teddy bear with me, but I lost him. Did he fall in your store?

Axyl starts walking out of the stadium seeying the boy was going to be busy, then she sees a small boy going to her asking about a teddy bear

"a teddy bear.... um..."

she thinks a bit but doesnt remenber any teddy bear, she then looks down at the small boy and gives a gentle smile

"tell you what... you come back with me to the shop, and we will look for it, how about it?"

extends her hand to him so the boy would give her his hand
Dude, Shin, I don't see -one- period at the end of your sentences. And you have like.. various run on sentences throughout the entire thing, you've basically made one big ass run-on sentence. You have promised to improve, but have failed to do so. I suggested that you should download a spell/grammar checker but you ignored it.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 03:47:32 AM »
I know, and it's always a good idea to have one. Microsoft word has a good one, but you can add things to your dictionary. Google chrome automatically checks your spelling, so if you're strapped for cash, I would go with that.
A quick Google search can get you a free grammar/spell checker. All you have to do is download it.
EDIT: I'm ready for a time change.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 03:40:29 AM »
There was nothing wrong with spelling an grammar rocks, only with length.
It was just a suggestion.

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Other Roleplay / Re: [OOCC] Poisoned Utopia
« on: January 21, 2012, 03:32:10 AM »
ok thanks for the warning, i will be honest, i frogot about that... so my apologies for it...
Maybe you should get a spell checker.

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News & Announcements / Re: STOP SOPA/PIPA
« on: January 21, 2012, 02:54:30 AM »
The government doesn't need SOPA. It can still do what SOPA was meant for, but at a much slower rate.

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General Chat / Re: [GUILD] Pokemon Knights
« on: January 20, 2012, 05:36:12 AM »
My favorite type is water.
I like turtles.
I like blastoise..

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Other Entertainment / Re: [CONTEST] Am I useful?
« on: December 22, 2011, 09:36:09 PM »
No rewards? Fail.
NOBODY is going to join.

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Other Chat / Re: Chit chat thread (May contain offensive content)
« on: December 19, 2011, 03:01:45 AM »

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Other Chat / Re: Chit chat thread (May contain offensive content)
« on: December 19, 2011, 02:35:16 AM »
The first three lines.
Before he took away the sig.

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