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Author Topic: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/17/11 Nidoking WIP  (Read 51908 times)

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #60 on: July 05, 2011, 03:30:25 AM »
It looks a lot better, but the arm still looks a bit fat.

Using my incredible Paint.NET skills, I have constructed an image of what could possibly fix it. (I'm not a very good artist, so feel free to ignore me :D)


This is actually very helpful. :]
I'll prolly do that. Other things mentioned in IRC were, reworking the shadows, making the black ears smaller, and moving the stripes closer to the head. :]

Thank you so much for your help!

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #61 on: July 05, 2011, 06:27:37 AM »
Alrighty. New Pikachu again.
Edits are:
totally new shadows
smaller black on ears
new pose
moved stripes on back

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #62 on: July 05, 2011, 06:55:54 AM »
I think you need a little improvement on the face. I've edited it so it looks better.


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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #63 on: July 05, 2011, 07:00:12 AM »
Ruby, Marry me. <3

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #64 on: July 05, 2011, 07:22:10 AM »
Then you'll have to marry the 2 other people married to me.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #65 on: July 05, 2011, 07:23:18 AM »
Then you'll have to marry the 2 other people married to me.
I'm ok with this if they are. :]

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #66 on: July 05, 2011, 07:41:18 AM »
I think you need a little improvement on the face. I've edited it so it looks better.



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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #67 on: July 05, 2011, 07:41:50 AM »
Looks much better now. Good job :D

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #68 on: July 05, 2011, 07:43:35 AM »
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #69 on: July 05, 2011, 07:56:17 AM »
Lol, Silver, Ruby, y'all are too awesome xD

And thank you Fred! I'm not finished yet, but I wanted to show the update. :]

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #70 on: July 05, 2011, 09:30:21 AM »
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Okay, the shades still seem off. Where is your lightsource?

Also, I like the one of Fred, besides the part that got a little ruined between the arms xD

One last thing, I think you forgot about the lines of the mouth :P
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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #71 on: July 05, 2011, 04:14:57 PM »
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Okay, the shades still seem off. Where is your lightsource?

Also, I like the one of Fred, besides the part that got a little ruined between the arms xD

One last thing, I think you forgot about the lines of the mouth :P

Light source is top left and a little in frontish... The shadows should be ok. Except for the rear leg. I need to fix that. You and Alais need to make up your minds. :P She's the one who wanted me to change all of the original shadows back to two colors and rework them completely, and now you're saying you like the old ones more. I'll try to find some kind of happy medium.
Also, I know its missing lines. I didn't put half of them because there's no point in me putting all the lines if I'm still going to be editing.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/04/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #72 on: July 05, 2011, 04:21:01 PM »
its better.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/05/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #73 on: July 05, 2011, 06:01:31 PM »
Alright, Finished the shading and outlining. Hopefully this is done now.

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Re: Annafu's Pokemon Vectors | Updated: 07/05/11 Pikachu!
« Reply #74 on: July 05, 2011, 06:04:24 PM »
Pika pi! (awesome pikachu!)
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