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Author Topic: [Quest] Territorial Mining  (Read 4444 times)

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[Quest] Territorial Mining
« on: January 23, 2012, 09:32:15 pm »
Quest: Territorial Mining.
Location: A forest (A protected nature preserve) near a mountain being mined for minerals.
Level: Doesn't really matter, depends if the quest is used and then where the landmarks are located.
Plot: Mining on the mountain has caused the Torkoal to be driven to their homes.  Pushing them into the forest, where a colony of shuckle live.

The quest is given by the manager (Rolo, it's totally a reference) of the preserve.  He is looking for strong trainers to investigate why the Torkoal are invading.

Part 1: Troubled Forest.

The player talks to Rolo.

Rolo: Ah!  This is a mess.  The Torkoal are everywhere, disrupting the habitat of my precious shuckle.  You look like a strong trainer.  Why don't you help out Diego the ranger here.  He is currently looking into the invasion.

Player (Choice): Option 1- "Sure, I'll help.  It's not good hearing that an entire habitat could be destroyed."
Option 2- "I'm sorry I'm in a rush.  If I find any free time I'll help out."

Obviously option 1 will be picked.

Rolo:  Great! Now go!  Get out there and save those shuckle!

Objective:  Talk to Diego.

The player then enters the preserve only to watch as a Torkoal and Shuckle are battling.  Diego then swoops in using a Kadabra, to quell the fighting.  Both the Shuckle and the Torkoal flee.

The player then talks to Diego.

Diego: Woah, that was crazy.  Are you ok?

Player Choice: Option 1-"I'm fine."
Option 2- That was close, I almost got caught up in that.  But, I'm ok."

Diego: That's good to hear.  Now I'm guessing your the trainer Rolo radioed in.  He said you were coming to help investigate.  First we need to stop this fighting.  I'll take the left side, you take the right.  If we can scare off these pokemon, they'll go into hiding.  Causing the fighting to cease, buying us time to find out what's happening.

Objective: Defeat various Torkoal and Shuckle

The player goes right and runs through the forest.  Battling various Shuckle and Torkoal, who work like trainers.  They see you and engage a battle.

Upon defeating the Pokemon, the forest trail will loop back to the start.  The player will meet up with Diego once again.

Diego: Hmmm.  Kadabra, using his psychic powers was able to look into one of the Torkoal's thoughts.  It seems something is happening up on the mountain.  Why don't you go check it out?  I'll stay here and keep both sides from fighting.

Objective: Climb the mountain.






Ok, let me know what you think.  I know the dialogue could be better.  But, I'm in a rush.  Just trying to post part 1 before work.
« Last Edit: January 24, 2012, 07:23:53 am by Bing »

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2012, 09:44:36 pm »
It's pretty good I can tell you put some work into this.
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2012, 10:02:34 pm »
It's a good start. I want to see what else you have in store for this.
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2012, 10:08:41 pm »
Oh, just a hint.

The miners are not friendly.

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2012, 10:12:01 pm »
That opens up some possibilities I can't wait to see what's next.
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2012, 12:28:19 am »
It's a bit interesting. I'm interested in seeing what happens on the mountain. Lol. Good stuff.
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2012, 06:31:54 am »
(I should have noted this before but, all pokemon during this quest are uncatchable.)
Part 2:  United Turtles.

Objective: Climb Mountain

The player heads up the path, pointed out by Diego.  (He takes the player to the start of the path)



Diego: Ok, here is the path.  Follow this and you'll end up at the top of the mountain.

Diego departs back into the reserve.

The payer then starts up the mountain.  Wild pokemon include various Torkoal and Shuckle.

About halfway up the player will walk in on a group of Torkoal battling a woman trainer.  She easily wins using a Sandslash and an Onix, the Torkoal then retreat down the mountain.

The woman walks up to the player.

Woman: Who are you?

Player choice: "I'm a trainer sent to investigate what's happening here on the mountain."
                     "First tell me who you are?"

If the first option is picked.

Woman:  Are you now...  Wonderful, I guess the jig is up.  My name is Vivian, and my company is mining this mountain for it's coal. 

Player: "What jig?"

Vivian: We operate outside of regulations.  It allows us to mine more coal faster.  Now that you know, we can't just let you leave.  Alex, Scott!  Get his fool.


Second Option.

Woman:  Who am I?  I'm Vivian, owner of this mining company.  And you are?

Player: "I'm a trainer sent to investigate what's happening here on the mountain."

Vivian: Well, I can't let you leave here then.  You see we operate outside of regulations, in order to mine faster.  Alex, Scott.  Get this fool!

Alex and Scott advance on the player.

Diego comes to the rescue along with a shiny Torkoal (Leader of the Torkoal).  Kadabra and Torkoal chase off Scott and Alex.

Diego: I've had another break through, Torkoal says that his group was forced out by the miners.  He want's us to reason with the Shuckle leader.

Player: "I've discovered that the miners are illegally mining the area.  We should try to get the Shuckle and Torkoal to join forces.

Objective: Confront the Shuckle leader.

Diego, the Player and the Torkoal leader head down the mountain.  They approach the Shuckle leader's den.  Three shuckle appear.  The Torkoal leader talks to them.  Diego lets out Kadabra, who communicates what is said.

Kadabra(Using psychic powers): It seems that the Shuckle agree to join forces against the miners, if we can defeat their three best battlers.

Player: "Bring it!" Or "If we must."

The player enters a triple battle Vs, three Shuckle.
The players pokemon is in the middle, Torkoal to his right and Kadabra to his left.

After winning, the player is met with a Shiny Shuckle, speaking through kadabra again.

Kadabra:You have proven your worth.  I shall accompany you to the miners camp.  And do not worry.  I will tell my Shuckle to hold off any fighting for now.  But, if we fail to defeat the miners the Torkoal cannot stay here.

The Torkoal leaders nods, agreeing to the terms.

Diego: Ok, "Insert Player Name", you go with these two and try to stop the miners.  I'll alert the authorities of the Illegal activities.

Objective: Defeat the miners.









Ok, I'm tired.  This is a bit rushed as well.  I'm gonna need to do some editing on a later date.

But anyway part 3 will be coming soon

Part 3: The Miner Fourty-Niner.




 

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2012, 08:07:41 am »
Woah, so we're going to confront the miners by using shiny Torkoal and shiny Shuckle? Cool  :)
But, there's no other wild pokemon in there? Like Zubats or anything that lives in the mountain...
just saying


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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2012, 10:15:26 am »
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Like Zubats or anything that lives in the mountain...

Oh god please no Zubats.... lol. But in all seriousness this sounds really cool. I am enjoying the read :)

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #9 on: January 25, 2012, 10:41:08 am »
this is a very good quest idea I can't wait to see what you do with part 3
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2012, 05:40:16 pm »
Woah, so we're going to confront the miners by using shiny Torkoal and shiny Shuckle? Cool  :)
But, there's no other wild pokemon in there? Like Zubats or anything that lives in the mountain...
just saying

You'll see why in part three.

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #11 on: January 26, 2012, 12:11:36 am »
Hmm... let me guess...
The miners are capturing all the other wild pokemon in the mountain as well?


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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #12 on: January 26, 2012, 12:30:56 am »
This is awesome, Nice work Bing, and lookin' forward to part three.

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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #13 on: January 26, 2012, 04:17:55 am »
Vivian sounds pretty awesome.... I wonder why C: lql cool quests btw Bing!
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Re: [Quest] Territorial Mining
« Reply #14 on: January 29, 2012, 08:02:58 pm »
Sorry, couldn't help adding option 3 here:

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Player Choice: Option 1-"I'm fine."
Option 2- That was close, I almost got caught up in that.  But, I'm ok."
Option 3 - "Who are you!? Quit taunting the pokemon around here!"

And no, you will have dozens of Woobats now :P

Overall, nice quest so far, quite simple (not meaning easy) I may say and... well, let's see the third part :)
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