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PkMn Trainer Black:
Note:
This is for pokemon showdown which has nothing to do with stat/movepool changes that PU has done. Please keep this in mind when giving advise to people. Thank you.

This is basically a topic for people who play Pokemon Showdown! or watches others. You can post your Battles, comment on others' battles and help them refine their team to max efficiency, and also to request battles. If you want to set a battle, make sure you post your Username for PS so it's possible to do so (or you can place it in the area that's always below your post.) Here's one of mine:

http://pokemonshowdown.com/replay/ou-41049140

This is my first and only Sand team I've ever created.


As for my Username, it's Shining Darkness.


ROLOCEDIT:
Added a little to the top

Roloc:
You can't really see everything about someone's team from just a replay. They would need to post their team as well if they needed help with it. I will be glad to help anyone who is looking for help with their team. :)


My first question to you, Black, is why do you have focus blast on t-tar? Superpower is far superior to focus blast even with it's negative effects. I'm not telling you to change it, just want to know why you use focus blast.

Humen:
oh someone critique my team here's a battle of perseverance and no one give me crap about thundurus.

http://pokemonshowdown.com/replay/ou-41376349

Now judge me! Heres all the data i offer:

Egg Maiden (Chansey) @ Eviolite
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SAtk
Bold Nature
- Wish
- Protect
- Toxic
- Seismic Toss

Desert Munch (Drapion) @ Razor Claw
Trait: Sniper
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- X-Scissor
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance
- Night Slash

RocketMan  (Golurk) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: No Guard
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- DynamicPunch
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- Ice Punch

Daffy (Golduck) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Cloud Nine
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
IVs: 0 Spd
- Rain Dance
- Aqua Jet
- Waterfall
- Cross Chop

Jagged Bullet (Rampardos) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Sheer Force
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Tail
- Earthquake
- Outrage
- Superpower

Lord Ragnarock (Thundurus-Therian) (M) @ BrightPowder
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Hasty Nature
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Thunderbolt
- Nasty Plot
- Substitute

Tickles:
Not much for offering hints, but this is my all purpose coverage team.

http://pokemonshowdown.com/replay/ou-41413553

(Sableye) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Prankster
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SDef
Calm Nature
- Recover
- Will-O-Wisp
- Taunt
- Foul Play

(Ditto) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Imposter
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Relaxed Nature
- Transform
- Transform
- Transform
- Transform

(Volcarona) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Flame Body
EVs: 252 SAtk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Quiver Dance
- Bug Buzz
- Hurricane
- Fire Blast

(Gliscor) (F) @ Flying Gem
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Acrobatics
- Earthquake
- Substitute

(Reuniclus) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Magic Guard
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Bold Nature
- Calm Mind
- Recover
- Psychic
- Focus Blast

(Breloom) (F) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 12 HP / 252 Atk / 244 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Spore
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb

Basically, I don't get stalled by weather, entry hazards, or any of the basic things opponents have. Sableye to stop boosters and status abusers, Ditto to take on a resist, or take advantage of a boosted opponent, Volcarona has dual use in both sun and rain. Reuniclus doesn't take weather damage, Gliscor for a nice boost sweep, and Breloom to do take care of slower, bulkier opponents. I have a few wins under my belt with this team, and I quite like it. But if you see something that can be improved, go ahead. Also, I don't know why all of them are female. I have it set to random gender.

Roloc:

--- Quote from: Humen on July 27, 2013, 09:50:37 AM ---oh someone critique my team here's a battle of perseverance and no one give me crap about thundurus.

http://pokemonshowdown.com/replay/ou-41376349

Now judge me! Heres all the data i offer:

Egg Maiden (Chansey) @ Eviolite
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SAtk
Bold Nature
- Wish
- Protect
- Toxic
- Seismic Toss

Desert Munch (Drapion) @ Razor Claw
Trait: Sniper
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- X-Scissor
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance
- Night Slash

RocketMan  (Golurk) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: No Guard
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- DynamicPunch
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- Ice Punch

Daffy (Golduck) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Cloud Nine
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
IVs: 0 Spd
- Rain Dance
- Aqua Jet
- Waterfall
- Cross Chop

Jagged Bullet (Rampardos) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Sheer Force
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Tail
- Earthquake
- Outrage
- Superpower

Lord Ragnarock (Thundurus-Therian) (M) @ BrightPowder
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Hasty Nature
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Thunderbolt
- Nasty Plot
- Substitute

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3 Choice scarfs? Seems quite team hindering if you ask me. I would suggest no more then 2 choice items per team.

Choice Scarf Rampardos? Even with jolly and max EVs it's still only 354 speed. While that's not a bad speed, you still put yourself at a disadvantage by not being able to switch moves. and with the moves you have chosen, a good tank/wall can switch in and stop rampardos. I recommend you replace outrage with head smash. head smash will be your go to attack and will put dents and OHKO every pokemon in the NU and RU tier even the tanks/walls.

4 physical attackers and 1 special attacker. I suggest you change golduck to a special attacker. It's a great special attacker with access to some pretty good special attacks.

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