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The Dream Eater

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Xatu:
As u rest in the bed , drifting away.
The clouds dissappears as a shadow figure appears
his eyes glow with hunger as he licks his fangs.
screthes his mouth over the victims head
as the victims sleeps in his bed
now the chew and noms as the victims awakens with no head

Yume Tsuki:
Could use some grammar fixes, still an interesting poem though.

Humen:
could use some more rhymes

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