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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #30 on: May 10, 2012, 10:02:45 PM »
DONE! would like feed back!
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #31 on: May 10, 2012, 11:05:17 PM »
Lol my paperdolls side view is alot chubbier than its front view :D
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #32 on: May 10, 2012, 11:41:41 PM »
Wow some nice entries already! Trying to work a bit on my paperdoll this weekend. But what DragonOfSky mentioned, what to do with shoes?

I've also some feedback:

@DragonOfSky: Yours is great already, try to add the eyes. Not looking that difficult though, but that actually doesnt really matter. Maybe the hair on the side views should be longer to the ears, because it isn't matching the front/back views. Also the lighting on the side views hair is in my opinion a bit to low, should be a few pixels higher. The outfit is great, I like the kind of bag. Also some pixels are from the template underwear, maybe you can fix that too? Nice job.

@lubbies: Also very nice, but maybe also like DragonOfSky a little bit basic. I don't really like the shadowing/highlighting of the body, because it's just an inline stroke. And for the looks, maybe you could try a bit fancier outfit?

@Meowth: This one's kinda weird, I don't get if the head contains hair or a cap. Or both? I like the idea of covering the eyes, but it isn't worked out that good. It's a nice try, but I think you can make better if you put some more time in it.

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #33 on: May 11, 2012, 12:14:41 PM »
Thankz for the feedback, Zatir! It was really nice and good ideas!
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #34 on: May 11, 2012, 03:51:07 PM »
K I added fancier clothes (split trenchcoat)

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #35 on: May 11, 2012, 04:54:44 PM »
K I added fancier clothes (split trenchcoat)



Wow, those clothes look stunning! But the eyes aren't right, look at Bryans post:

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #36 on: May 11, 2012, 04:57:15 PM »
I'll try but if it doesn't work out hell have his eyes slightly raised.

EDIT: You're right it now looks better.

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #37 on: May 11, 2012, 07:21:31 PM »
I made Gangplank from League of Legends with the sprite.

I'm not too happy with how the back and sides of the hat turned out, or the side facial hair, so suggestions to improve are requested.

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #38 on: May 11, 2012, 09:06:13 PM »
K now the final choice,

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #39 on: May 12, 2012, 11:18:50 AM »
 Here is my first attempt at making the League of Legends Champion: Ezreal. Would like some feedback on what needs fixing (if not everything) so that I don't have to spend hours making all the other poses and spending more fixing it. :D

 
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #40 on: May 12, 2012, 11:32:22 AM »
When you first said Ezreal I thought it was a girl but when I search it on google it's a boy so you're paper doll is feminine.  Try shorting his hair a tad.
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #41 on: May 12, 2012, 12:42:01 PM »
Dragonborn:

There's my formal submission.
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #42 on: May 12, 2012, 02:31:43 PM »
Genbor, the only thing I can say about yours is you should add shading to areas like the jacket(?), gloves and boots with darker or lighter shades of the colours you used. Really nice.

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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #43 on: May 12, 2012, 04:10:33 PM »
Maybe a bit of shading on the hair. its a bit too bright
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Re: Paperdoll Competition
« Reply #44 on: May 12, 2012, 08:37:55 PM »
When did everybody get good at pixel art?