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Creative Discussions => Fan Fiction & Writing => Topic started by: Xatu on November 22, 2013, 05:50:08 AM

Title: The Dream Eater
Post by: Xatu on November 22, 2013, 05:50:08 AM
As u rest in the bed , drifting away.
The clouds dissappears as a shadow figure appears
his eyes glow with hunger as he licks his fangs.
screthes his mouth over the victims head
as the victims sleeps in his bed
now the chew and noms as the victims awakens with no head
Title: Re: The Dream Eater
Post by: Yume Tsuki on November 22, 2013, 10:21:05 AM
Could use some grammar fixes, still an interesting poem though.
Title: Re: The Dream Eater
Post by: Humen on November 22, 2013, 08:40:29 PM
could use some more rhymes