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Quests & Plots / Re: The Isles of Sungivai Chain Quest
« on: March 14, 2010, 08:06:59 PM »
Good writing Saleboi. I really liked the speech of the dude, it gives him more personality than just talking like a robot. :P
There's only one thing I'd like to point out, you start off by giving the quest high requirements
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Requirements to start quest/except it: Must have no less then 17 gym badges from the Miryus region, and have been in the top 3 or have won the Miryus region Pokémon League, also must have defeated the Brutal Five.
But as far as I can tell the first quest involves you walking to a beach. Not exactly challenging is it?:P
Also for the last quest all you really need to do is teleport to the island (unless you were thinking of putting trainers in the way).
So personally, I think you should just make it either one quest where you get the reward from the guys brother (he doesn't have anything on him to reward you with). Or there is only a reward for the second quest.
But on the whole, good work :)




Thank you Declan_23 on your feedback. Now on to the requirements of Quest "Howz it Braddah". The reason why i have given the quest those requirements is because i intend the journey into the isles of Sungivai to be after you have gone into the pokemon league winning it, or at least have made it in the top three proving you were one of the chosen best. The Defeat of the Brutal Five is one of the requirements as well because of the relation they have with the gym leader on Sungivai, who is actually there old master thus making him just as strong as they are individually. It would prove to be a great challenge for them as well. Seeing as how actual PVP battle will be more challenging for the player then NPC opponents would. All in all like I've told Jerry who is also a member of our community, refining and adapting my story or quest if you will, is a natural part of being a writer. Changing the requirements of the quest to meet the needs of our players is always an option to better adapt to what PU in general is capable of before it's launch. As for your concerns about the difficulty/challenge of the First and Final quest. The Chain quest as a whole isn't meant to be challenging or difficult, the chain quest is simply meant as your passage to Sungivai isles. Having journeyed around the Miryus region defeating 17 gym leaders, as well as  the Brutal Five while placing third or even winning the pokemon league are challenging enough let alone with all the other event's and Players that you will encounter. If you are a player that loves challenge and being tested then Sungivai is for you. There are pleny of quests on Sungivai to choose from, with difficulty varying with each of them. Like i said before the chain quest i have here is simply your passage into Sungivai, where the real fun begins. Thankyou again for your feedback Declan_23 it's always welcome.               

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Quests & Plots / Re: The Isles of Sungivai Chain Quest
« on: March 14, 2010, 07:18:40 PM »
Good creative way to enter the islands!

Like the many quests suggested by our members, there is one thing I'd like to say. There is that MMO factor. It is not 100% certain that some features can be made visible for some, invisible for others.

Like if you completed that quest, the Snorlax won't be on the ring for you, but will still be there for those who haven't done the quest!

Hmm.. on the the PU team has to tell us whether or not those features can be implemented.


Thankyou for reading Jerry i appreciate your feedback on all my posts. Now on to what you were saying about the visible/invisible feature. Now we've all played most of the hand held pokemon games, and have been in many situation's where curtain NPC will only show up in game after you have accomplished or done a curtain thing first. Now i personally don"t know if PU will have this same feature as the hand held games do. Never the less, refining and adapting my chain quest to meet what PU is capable of before launch is always an option, as far as I'm concerned it's not even a guarantee that The isles of Sungivai will be added to PU, it will live only on the support our great community gives it, that's why i urge for you all to help make Sungivai a reality in PU. As a writer you are always tasked with adapting such thing's so that your story better fit's in the picture and in the eye's of your reader's. Evolving your story is also a necessary part of refining your methods as a writer aswell. Again thank you for your great feedback's Jerry they are always welcome.   

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Quests & Plots / The Isles of Sungivai Chain Quest
« on: March 13, 2010, 11:44:43 PM »
Alright thank you for being here i hope you enjoy this chain quest, and i wish you all good luck with Spirit's quest contest. There are three parts to it hence way it's called a chain quest, before you start reading here i highly advise that you read another one of my ideas i posted on Ideas & Suggestions in the Game Features section called "The Isles of Sungivai". Why you say? because it tells the story/bio of Sungivai isles which will be featured in the chain quest. So reading it will give you a better understanding of the location,backstory and such. Here is the link to it http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,592.msg7368.html#msg7368 Once you have read it then you may choose to read another one of my story's called "Legend of the first ghost pokemon" which is one of the leagends told in Sungivai isles. Here's the link to that http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,585.0.html Now you dont have to read that story if you don't want too but again i highly advise you read "The isles of Sungivai" so that you have a better understanding of what's going on in this chain quest enjoy!!!!!!!!!


Part 1 Begin

Quest Name: Howz It Braddah!!!!!

Requirements to start quest/except it: Must have no less then 17 gym badges from the Miryus region, and have been in the top 3 or have won the Miryus region Pokémon League, also must have defeated the Brutal Five.

Quest Description

Hey howz it braddah, you must be “Name of the trainer”. Brah I heard you defeated the Brutal five, good job braddah good job. It takes plenty of courage to go up against the five. It even takes great power and the understanding of pokemon to have defeated all of them too. You know what braddah? I think you have what it takes to journey to the isles of Sungivai and defeat the Brutal Fives old master, who’s gym is located up at Mount. Destiny. So tell me “Name of the trainer”, you think you have what it takes to defeat the Brutal Fives old master?

*The player is then given a choice to say yes? or no?*

*The text for No*
Oh braddah thats to bad, I really felt great manna in you. Ok then “Name of the trainer” comeback when you think you got what it takes farewell……

*The text for Yes*
Thats what I like to hear, alright Mount. Destiny is located on the island of Vaitaku where I’m from braddah, but the thing is there are giant whirlpools that surround Vaitaku making it almost impossible to get past, unless you are one of the navigators of the island, which I’m not. The only way us Vaitakuians get on and off the island is by 1 of 2 things. 1 we fly over the whirlpools with our ghost pokemon, because using any other kind of air flight will cause the whirlpools to suck in whatever is in the sky. Or 2, by teleportation rings the Vaitakuians & ghost pokemon created to allow us to travel back and forth, on and off the island. The problem is a Snorlax is sitting on my ring, haha don’t ask braddah how that when happen and I didn’t bring my pokemon with me when I left the island, so as you can see braddah I’m in a bit of a bind. Using your pokemon to help move the snorlax should solve that problem. So how about it “Name of the trainer” are you ready to help a braddah out?

*The Player is again given a choice to say yes? or no?*

*The text for No that will continue to repeat itself until you say yes*
Oh braddah you’re really bumming me out, you sure you don’t want to help a braddah out?

*The text for Yes*
That’s what I’m talking about “Name of the trainer”

Quest Reward “xxxxx Amount Of Coins/Money”
Accept quest Yes? No?

Once the player accepts, the quest giver will tell the Player to meet him at “What ever the name of the closest beach is, where the Snorlax is located”. Once there you will talk to him again completing the first part of this chain quest receiving your reward for it and then talking to him again in order to start the second part of the chain quest.

Part 1 Complete


Part 2 Begin

Quest Name: Men In Black???

Requirements to start quest/except it: Completing quest “Howz It Braddah!!!!!”

Quest Description

Oh boy, we’re in trouble “Name of the trainer”. You see that Snorlax over there? That’s him, but it looks like those men in black are still here, sigh. Ok “Name of the trainer” I think I should tell you what really happened. You see this beach is the Vaitakuian main teleporting destination location to go back and forth to Vaitaku and “What ever the name of this island is that they are on. I’m guessing it’s one of the main islands that have a city/town and gym”. I’ve gone back and forth many times without any kind of problem, but the last two times I used this teleport destination those men in black were watching me. I originally came here to deliver a pokemon that our spirit doctor healed for a friend that lives not to far from here but those guys in black attacked me with they’re pokemon, the only one I had on me was the healthy pokemon that was just healed, so I used him. I know what your thinking braddah and yes it is that Snorlax. When I called him out I took the time to hide in back of Snorlax and plant the ring under him guessing that’s what they wanted was the ring. I would have used it then to escape but it has a 15min wait time after using it to teleport somewhere braddah. I told the Snorlax I’d be back with some help and here you are “Name of the trainer”, don’t get mad braddah I hope you understand and help me. Will you help me?

*The player is then given a choice to say yes? or no?

*The text for No that will continue to repeat itself until you say yes*
Braddah this is no time to play around will you help me?

*The text for Yes*
I knew you wouldn’t let me down braddah. Ok here’s the plan, I need you to go distract and defeat those four men in black while I go retrieve the ring from Snorlax. Come talk to me when you’re finished with them braddah.

Quest Reward “Vaitakuian Teleportation Ring”

Accept quest Yes? No?


Okay once you accept the quest you will have to confront the men in black who are actually Team Rocket. Now I will not get into Specifics on the battle the player will have with Team Rocket. That is for me and the PU Quest/NPC writer Sprit to know if my chain quests are one of the few picked for future installment in PU, I can’t go telling you guys everything lol that would just spoil the surprise. I will say this one of the four is a very high elite commander that’s only second to Giovanni himself. After you have defeated the four in battle you will return to the quest giver, turn it in and receive your reward for it and then talk to him again to start the final part of this chain quest.

Part 2 Complete


Part 3 Begin

Quest Name: Entry Into Ghost Isles

Requirements to start quest/except it: Completed quest “Men In Black”

Quest Description
You have done a great deed braddah, and I am glad to have met such a great trainer such as yourself. Take the ring “Name of the trainer” and walk over to the purple sand mound. Stand on it and rub the ring two times, it will teleport you to my home in Popoapu Village located on the island of Vaitaku. Once there let my family know I am alright and you are a friend of mine, look for my brother and ask him to send my Haunter with another teleportation ring to me. I will stay here and deliver this Snorlax to its rightful trainer. I thank you again “Name of the trainer” and I hope to see you on Vaitaku in the near future farewell friend.

 Quest Reward: “Entry into Sungivai Isles and an xxxxx Amount Of Coins/Money”

Accept quest Yes? No?



Once you accept, stand on the purple mound and an option will appear asking if you want to rub the ring two times, press yes and you will have teleported to Popoapu Village on the island of Vaitaku located in the Sungivai isles. Once in the quest givers home turn in the quest to his brother, where you will have told him what happened thus completing the quest and receiving your reward. After that, leave the home and explore the island of Vaitaku which will have many other quests to keep you busy.




Part 3 Complete

Chain Quest Complete



Alright i hope you all enjoyed and again good luck and much love to all the people that are participating in Spirit's Quest contest i wish you all the best.



 

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New Trainers / Welcome / Re: New trainer hangout
« on: March 13, 2010, 05:51:50 PM »
Welcome gamma welcome :P

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Quests & Plots / Re: Poisoned Garden Quest
« on: March 13, 2010, 02:41:10 PM »
Your Poisoned Garden Quest is one of the best idea's I've seen so far in these forms. Great job thumbs up from me :P

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Yes, I didn't include him because of his alternate forms, and if ever it was to be found somewhere in the wild, it wouldn't be holding any plate, would it?



True (: good job good job indeed.

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It's really good! I'm longing to see more from you, Saleboi! :)

Hmm... the ghost type pokemon I can think of now are:
Gastly
Haunter
Gengar
Misdreavus
Shedinja
Sableye
Shuppet
Banette
Duskull
Dusclops
Drifloon
Drifblim
Mismagius
Spiritomb
Dusknoir
Frostlass
Rotom
Giratina

I can't think of more... maybe that's it. :)

18 ghost pokemons, including one legendary, one I consider semi legendary.


Yup thats all of them haha ty for supporting the isles of Sungivai. Also remember Arceus can change into a ghost pokemon type aswell in it's spooke form.

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Im up for almost anything that relates to implementing more ghosts in the game. :P

And I like the idea of having an Isle that features ghosts instead of the cliche haunted house/building.

The only thing is, adding 8 islands which would be dubbed as the "Ghost isles". I dont know all 493 poke's but im certain that there arnt enough ghost poke's to satisfy 8 islands.

This is something that would obviously have to be put in later in the game but I like the idea.



Thank you for your support ghostman50. Now about the eight islands, as i said before Vaitaku is the only island inhabited by people and is the largest of the 8. The other seven are like rocks compared to the size of Vaitaku, but still big enough to be called islands. There's more to the islands then meets the eyes as well Spoiler alert lol the entire isle in term "location of the islands" from really high in the sky looks like a triangle, so when someone has entered within the boundaries of the islands they refer to it as "We've just entered the Sungivai triangle". Again refining and evolving my story will happen if the PU team looks into my work, which i hope they do. Again ty for your support ghostman50 faaaaa!!!!!   

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Fan Fiction & Writing / Re: Legendary Story Of The First Ghost Pokemon
« on: March 12, 2010, 03:44:41 PM »
Check out the announcements on the Quests and Plots board, under the mother board Ideas and Suggestions :)



Ah thank you for the info I've already looked into it. I have also made a base story/bio on the location where the quests I'm working on are gonna take place. Here's the link to it, please do look into it and tell me what you think i could use the support faaa!!!!!!


Story/bio of The Sungivai Isles: http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,592.0.html

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Game Features / The Isles of Sungivai
« on: March 12, 2010, 03:20:15 PM »
I've been working on the story for my new isles idea that i'd like to see added to PU, I'm a great storyteller and i love to create great story's, so I'm hoping in the future my work here is useful to the PU team. I am also prepared to have a drawn out map of Sungivai so that the PU team have a better understanding of the look and Structure of the isles. Before i start the story, here's the link to another one of my story's called "Legendary Story Of The First Ghost Pokemon" which is one of the legend's told on Vaitaku island in Sungivai isles, so it does have relation to the story you are about to read here.

Legend Of The First Ghost Pokemon Link http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,585.0.html

Alright hope you enjoy the story/biography of The Isles of Sungivai






The Isles of Sungivai also nicknamed “Ghost Isles” is located in the south pacific within the Miryus region. There are a total of 8 islands with only 1 of the 8 being inhabited by humans. That island is called Vaitaku, and the natives that live there are called Vaitakuians. Out of the 8 lslands of the Isles of Sungivai, Vaitaku is the largest and most lively of the rest.

The traditional “vaitakuian way” remains a strong force in vaitakuian life and the natural energy of the island, Vaitaku maintains its historical customs, While many if not all of the other isles in the Miryus region have built citys and advanced technology on their islands, Vaitaku has not. You will not find pokemon Centers or Pokemarts on the island ether, for centuries the Vaitakuians have used other methods of healing there pokemon called “spiritual healing” which only spirit doctors on the island can perform, threw the use of “Manna” which the people of the island describe as being a form of supernatural energy in Vaitakuian religion that inheres in all things.

For your trainer needs such as purchasable items or pokeballs you would have to talk to the village’s master navigator/trader who journeys all the regions collecting many items all over the world. Vaitaku also has it’s own gym, located on the highest mountain on the island and in the Miryus region called Mount. Destiny. Let it be known that the Vaitaku gym is not an official gym or is in anyway connected to the official Pokémon League Commission and there official 17 gyms located on other isles in the Miryus region.

Trainers simply journey to the Isles of Sungivai to see if they are worthy and able to defeat “High Chief Mafaofao,solevai,tosonafanua,kefefemanoana” who is said to have trained “The Brutal Five” long ago. Out of the 950 trainers that have journeyed to Mount. Destiny, only 3 have made it to the top, only to have been utterly defeated. Vaitakuians are deeply spiritual and religious people, such as the ancient beliefs that continue to co-exist side-by-side with the ghost pokemon that also inhabit Sungivai Isles.

Particularly in regard to the traditional customs and rituals of “the Vaitakuian way” the Vaitakuian culture is centered around the relationships between people and pokemon. These relationships are based on respect, trust and loyalty, when ghost pokemon journeyed to Sungivai isles thousand of years ago most Vaitakuians welcomed them, unlike the other isles which were scared and didn’t want them around. Currently 98% of the population identify themselves as ghost pokemon trainers/breeders.


Alright so far that is the base story/bio i created for The Isles Of Sungivai. Of course if i can get enough support from our PU community, hopefully our great PU team will pay more thought into making Sungivai Isles come to life in the PU. If that happens then i will spend more time refining and evolving  this story & such to that it can adapt in PU. Thank you all for reading and i hope you all enjoyed faaaa!!!!!!!!   
 
Also here's a better understanding of how the isles look and where the islands are located.


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Fan Fiction & Writing / Re: Legendary Story Of The First Ghost Pokemon
« on: March 11, 2010, 09:43:49 PM »
Woah, that's probably the most moving thing I've read on this forums. Keep up the good work. If you have any other ideas you might want to enter Spirit's quest competition (if you haven't already)


Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. Spirit's quest competition you say? hmm interesting, what is it for/about. If you could give me more information about it I'd be glad to take a look into it (:

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New Trainers / Welcome / Re: New trainer hangout
« on: March 11, 2010, 03:13:46 PM »
Welcome all welcome!!!!!

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New Trainers / Welcome / Re: Saleboi introduction
« on: March 11, 2010, 10:19:04 AM »
Welcome again Salesi! :)



Ty ty *bows*

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Fan Fiction & Writing / Re: Legendary Story Of The First Ghost Pokemon
« on: March 11, 2010, 10:14:14 AM »
It was nice. The only comment I'll make, is that the mother Kangaskhan turned into a male Gengar (4th paragraph)? :o


Oh wow your right, I'll have to add an s to he lol anyway thank you for the heads up. hoped you liked the story.

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General Chat / Re: whats your favorite pokemon region
« on: March 10, 2010, 07:31:49 PM »
My favorite region is Miryus because I don't know what to expect.


I'd have to say Kanto cause the original series was my fav. I'm hoping Miryus steals the shows aswell :P

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