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LeoReborn:

--- Quote from: Viper on November 30, 2010, 04:41:25 AM ---Well then just make a new thread and reserve how many spots you want.

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Easier said than done.


--- Quote from: Jerry on November 30, 2010, 07:47:06 AM ---And... you could make the little parts a little longer... like merging part 3 and 4 wouldn't hurt... escpecially if you made them close enough, referring to time.

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Problem
Merging two parts of a story, good idea.... however, not so much when the POV changes.

So, A new part arrives on point, with either a change in perspective, or major time lapse.



No offense, but it seems like you guys don't read these individual segments.

Jerry:
Well, to be honest, it's getting a little boring... after your two previous unfinished works, this one seems like some repetition in some way...

LeoReborn:
it is funny... I FINISHED them. I decided not to addon to Year 13, It was already at that point. The point where I stopped

Jerry:
[EDIT: Right, you finished the first one, I'm sorry for that... :( ]

Really?


--- Quote from: Unbreakable on October 28, 2010, 03:29:59 AM ---I know, I have been neglecting Year 13 lately, I will try to finish it and post the rest..

In the wait, I have a side-story for you guys.

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I thought that they could be further exploited... :-\ Okay.

LeoReborn:
I thought they could too, but I realized I was adding onto something that was already done.

The idea is not to keep adding on, but stop when the story ends.

I may not finish this series for I have a story with a higher priority, because its about what Ive actually experienced.

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