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Lucario goes to the poffin shop!

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Jerry:
Things you can add...

1. The setting (time, weather maybe, type of environment or better, give hints at this, etc)
2. The plot (why are they doing this or that? Maybe tell a little of what happened before, what is happening)
3. The structure (use of paragraphs is a big issue)

Try those for now. :)

repo222:
the story is kinda childish. But impressive :D

Frenchfry:
Repo, the man boy who made this thread is permabanned.

Actually, now that he's gone, I can freely say that reading this story made me want to vomit.

UnationConsideration:
....What's up with all these newbs?

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