Quote from: Wire on May 08, 2011, 02:10:56 PM

well someone sounds like their licking up to someone.

I'm not licking up to him. I'm serious. He's one of the devs. If a dev tells you not to do something, you don't do it anymore. That's how you get banned.

@Yukimenoko: Wire usually gives negative comments if he's talking about someone else's artwork. I think your sprites are really good though. You're way better than I am. I suck at pixel art.

Even I needed training to become this good at spriting, just to say. I couldn't become this good If there weren't people who gave constructive critics. Unlike SOMEONE who only says meh and is not telling what's wrong about the artwork.

Instead of crushing someone into the ground with critics only, like you do...

You can also give someone CONSTRUCTIVE critics. Help them improve, all I've seen you doing in the past three days that I joined this community is giving negative crictic on almost everything.

Like eddie is working now on the sprites, is fine. I once also started off like that. Of course it could be more impressive. But we are humans, if anybody did something perfect in once it would be a miracle.

Here's an example for my improvement on making trainer sprites completely from scratch:



At this sprite it was my first attempt to sprite a human. By that time I wasn't really impressive with drawing humans. And she does look a little odd..

Heres my newest Trainer sprite:


Much better right? I just made it. ~

The first sprite I showed was made about more than a year ago. Look how much I improved onto it... And thats all thanks to constructive critics. Eddie, keep up the good work I'm sure you'll become a great pixel artist someday ~

Yume heard a door unlocking, she opened her eyes. It was the same guy like always. He always came to take me to the breakroom for dinner. The guy clicked an collar made of metal around her body.

"I feel like a dog..."
"Listen kid, we're not going to complain about this every time I chain you. Now get on the move or there will be no food for you tonight."
"Tch, fine. It's not like I can do anything at all without a Instrument..."

The sound of metal chains rang through the room and they went off for the breakroom.

Dragon Rage

Yukimenoko used hax,
She released herself.

Banned because you're another person who was a togetic according to the personality test.

I'm writing this quest after looking at the thread about gaining fossils. Since there are so many fossils there might be diffrent quests right? So I'll write one for the fossil containing a Tirtouga

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Location: Beach
Requirements: The HM move Surf/The HM move Dive

You start off at a beach. A archeologist (or whatever) is standing and watching in the distant of the ocean. When you talk to him He starts telling a long story.

"Fossils are my life, I have collected many fossils on many expeditions. I heard there is a secret cavern somewhere around here. It should be underwater. Probably containing many fossils from the past life of the sea."
> Really? What kind of fossils?
> Sorry sir, I'm not intrested in your stories.

"Intrested I see? Hohoho, I can say nonetheless! Fossils are amazing and who knows what kind of fossils can be found! Too bad I can't go explore myself... I'm too old to go diving, and I have no Pokémon that can help me traveling over the vast Sea."
> Maybe I can go in your place. And get a few fossils for you.
> That's too bad... Well, I have to go now.

"Really? You really want to do that? Thank you! I'm so happy. Hey, if you find any fossils you may have one. Thank you so much!"

After this context you go out at sea using surf looking for the place to use Dive. When you find it and dive underwater there is a underwater maze. At the end of the maze you'll find a big crack in the wall. You'll enter and end up in a cave. This cave is filled with rocks and are mainly a puzzle to get through the rooms. You'll end up in a room where a person stands.

"What a rare fossils, they now belongs to us..."
"..."
"Hey, what are you looking at kid? These fossils are mine... uh I mean ours"
> Who are you talking about
> Oh sorry, I didn't know it was yours I'll leave you now.

"Mind your own business kid. Prepare to be beaten up."

Then the trainer fight begins, the guy you're fighting has a Rock type and a Water Type Pokémon.

"Ayee! No good! Flee!"

The guy runs leaving the Quest Item that was in the room. It is a Bag filled with fossils. Then you'll return to the Archeologist.

"Amazing! You were able to find some fossils!"
"..."
"Oh yeah thats right I promised you would get a fossil. A promise is a promise. Please keep one. It was already amazing you made this discovery. I got three kinds of fossils, which one do you want?"
> Dome Fossil
> Helix Fossil
> Cover Fossil

After that you get the fossil of your choise and are able revive it where they have a fossil revive company.

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So.. That was my first quest... Critics are allowed so I can improve this story. ^^

Yukimenoko is unaffected
Yukimenoko drew a mustache on Black's face
It's super effective