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Offline Xatu

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The Dream Eater
« on: November 22, 2013, 05:50:08 AM »
As u rest in the bed , drifting away.
The clouds dissappears as a shadow figure appears
his eyes glow with hunger as he licks his fangs.
screthes his mouth over the victims head
as the victims sleeps in his bed
now the chew and noms as the victims awakens with no head

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Re: The Dream Eater
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2013, 10:21:05 AM »
Could use some grammar fixes, still an interesting poem though.

Claiming that someone else's marriage is against your religion is like being angry at someone for eating a doughnut because you're on a diet.

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Re: The Dream Eater
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2013, 08:40:29 PM »
could use some more rhymes
Sticks and stones can break my bones and names can make me feel like i deserved it.