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Pokemon Chronicles: Gifted Ones

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Frenchfry:

--- Quote from: Frenchfry on February 22, 2011, 12:41:36 PM ---Whenever there's a new speaker, start a new line.

--- End quote ---
Double spacing isn't necessary for each line. Double space for new paragraphs, not the whole thing.

PkMn Trainer Black:
I'll try that. the only reason It was double spaced is because that's how i'm typing it for my story since if it seems good to Mr. Stephens, then i'll get extra credit.

Jerry:
Good, go on :)

PkMn Trainer Black:
Part 4- Worries Become Reality
   Daveto and Siriana has ran a good distance to hide from Gray. They rested for a few minutes to catch their breath. When started to walk again, there was rustling from all angles and sides.

“What is that?” asked Siriana.

“Whatever it is, get ready for it,” said Daveto then thought to himself, I hope Gray doesn’t plan on us being caught. If so, it’s not going to happen. An Air Cutter instantly came from behind them. Daveto pushed Siriana out of the way and was hit instead. Luckily, it barely skimmed him. Two Air Slashes and a Leech Life came towards Siriana. The pokeball that she received from Gray opened automatically, as did Daveto’s. A Snivy came out of Daveto’s pokeball and a Chickorita came out of Siriana’s. The Chickorita used Grass Pledge to stop the first Air Slash then Razor Leaf to stop the other. Snivy caught the Leech Life with Vine Whip and returned to sender. The attackers finally revealed themselves. There were four Crobat as the assassins.

“So it is Gray,” said Siriana under her breath. Both of them put their Scouters and revealed the moves of Snivy and Chickorita. Daveto smirked and said, “Snivy, Leaf Tornado.”

  “Chickorita, aim your Razor Leaf into the Leaf Tornado,” reacted Siriana quickly. When the moves were executed, the Razor Leaves made a ring around the Leaf Tornado. Two of the Crobats were sucked in and the Razor Leaves went into the Leaf Tornado and the Crobat were screaming in agony. They reached the top of the tornado and were slammed into the ground. The other two used Air Slash again and landed critical hits on Snivy and Chickorita. Daveto and Siriana called them back and sent out Grovyle and Chimchar. One of the Crobats shot a Leech Life at Chimchar.

“Dig,” shouted Siriana, the chimp went underground and dodged the attack. The other Crobat used Air slash then dashed behind it.

“Dragon Breath then Leaf Blade,” said Daveto calmly. Grovyle released a red beam of energy at the Air Cutter and destroyed it. Crobat came up shortly with a Cross Poison. Grovyle intercepted it with two Leaf Blades. When they came into contact, Grovyle was being pushed back. He used his free Leaf Blade to slice Crobat’s head off . Unfortunately, the Cross Poison had a secondary effect besides damage. Grovyle’s status turned to Poison Mode.

“Come out of hiding and use Thunder Punch,” commanded Siriana. When Chimchar came from underground it was covered in blinding light, Preventing Crobat from attacking. When the glowing stopped. Chimchar was of no more. A new Pokemon took form.

“Monferno!” That was its battle cry.

“So you’re a Monferno now…” Siriana stopped talking from being in shock. Without an order, Monferno’s hand turned sky blue. He was seen in only three spots of dust until he punch Crobat dead in the face in a blink of an eye and sent it flying. Monferno learned how to use Mach Punch! The Crobat recovered and glided at amazing speed with Poison Fang. Siriana finally got out of shock and said, “Sorry, Monferno. Wrap it up with Thunder Punch!” Monferno took the same pose of when it was a Chimchar. His hand electrified to the same amount as it’s Chimchar’s Mega Thunder Punch. Instead of clenching his teeth, he grinned and took off. A huge explosion occurred when the two moves collided. Crobat was roasted. Unluckily, Monferno had its status changed to Deadly Poison Mode. Both Grovyle and Monferno returned to their pokeballs to slow the poison’s circulation.

“We need to find Pecha Berries fast,” exclaimed Daveto. Siriana nodded and sent out her Dewott. The three started to look for the berries, but all they found were Sitrus berries and took them. They reached the end of the forest after an hour of searching and ended up at the docks, their destination and noticed a Pokemon Center. They burst through the doors and went to the counter and asked if they could have their pokemon healed.

The man turned around and said, “ What’s the problem?” They let out the four pokemon that needed attention. “Jeannette, take care of the Monferno and Chickorita. I’ll take care of the other two,” said the man. The lady known as Jeannette came from a room to the right. She was a light skinned woman with purple hair, a purple short sleeve shirt with a Seviper on the front of it. Her pants and heels were black.

“Got it, Brock,” she said. Right after, a gigantic explosion occurred at the center of the island. Daveto and Siriana tried to dash out the door, but the two pokeballs from Silver and Red opened automatically. They turned into a shiny Gardevior and a shiny Lucario.

They both grabbed the two kids and used telepathy, saying, “Don’t. You’ll just get yourselves killed along with them. That’s the reason they gave us to you two.”  Daveto looked up at Gardevior and Siriana looked up at Lucario. Siriana bursts into tears on Lucario’s chest while Daveto takes his hat off of his head and places it on his chest and shows respect along with Gardevior when she bows down. After a few minutes, everything was under control at the dock. The soon to be trainers got their pokemon back and ran to the Portman. He easily recognized Lucario and Gardevior and let the four of them on a private boat to the Sinnoh Region, where their real adventure begins…


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Mr. Fox:
thats cool...

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