First Map.

[baralai15]

I didn't really know where to put this since I would like to learn and become a mapper eventually so i thought here would be good.

Well I just finished this map and its my first ever so please be honest and give me some tips

[Mr_Dark]

You sure this is the first map you made, because it looks pretty good (compared to other "first" maps I've seen).

[baralai15]

Yes in all honesty and I am 100% sure that this is my first map. I just decided to try it out. It's pretty fun but I wanted to add detail instead of throwing in random things and I saw the other maps and used peoples tips to create mine. All I need now is other peoples suggestions to improve them.

I plan on making another one later on tonight so i have a variety of maps any suggestions of what kind I should make? Maybe an actual city, route, cave, idk yet.

[stephenkill2]

Aside from the hedges behind the pokecenter, which look like they are floating next to the roof, everything looks pretty good.

[Declan_23]

Pretty good mate. The one thing I would say (and it's a bit picky) is that all of the grass you have is in perfect squares. If you removed a couple of squares (say like 5) in random places it should look a little bit better

[baralai15]

Aside from the hedges behind the pokecenter, which look like they are floating next to the roof, everything looks pretty good.

Lol yea i was going to remove them but I guess i forgot, thanks for the suggestion

Pretty good mate. The one thing I would say (and it's a bit picky) is that all of the grass you have is in perfect squares. If you removed a couple of squares (say like 5) in random places it should look a little bit better

Alright, I will do that, do i put anything else in those empty spots or do I just leave them grass?

[Sch3rox]

hey bralai15 the map seems very awesome gratz, and are the sprites of Heart Gold /Soul Silver out so you can use them

[baralai15]

Thanks and Im not quite sure lol I just found this map editor yesterday so Im going to test it out and create a couple more maps.

[Amphi]

you should trying making a city similar to phenic city in the orre region can be called new phenic city

[baralai15]

Made another map, well not totally finished. I want to see what people think I should add or remove please help out

you should trying making a city similar to phenic city in the orre region can be called new phenic city

Sure you got the exact picture of phenic city? and I'll try my best lol

[Neos]

its Full with mistakes ...

but its good as A 1ST MAP .... mapping needs just practicing

If you want really learn mapping  i advice you too satart with routes 

this site may help you :

http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokers/index.html

try to copy ... it will learn you many new Mapping trix

this is a map made by me :

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8161/r104.png

and yeah if you don t have a pleasure in mapping than don t ...

hope i helpped with somthing ...

[baralai15]

its Full with mistakes ...

but its good as A 1ST MAP .... mapping needs just practicing

If you want really learn mapping  i advice you too satart with routes 

this site may help you :

http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokers/index.html

try to copy ... it will learn you many new Mapping trix

this is a map made by me :

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8161/r104.png

and yeah if you don t have a pleasure in mapping than don t ...

hope i helpped with somthing ...

Thanks for the advice, but can you tell me what the mistakes are? Thats what I am looking for most please

[Neos]

well ...

- no grass in cities (safe palce)
- that s not the good way to use the flowred grass xD
- trees are randomly organized
- you don t use the right wood panels
- some tiles a randomly used
- you used some interies tiles (that must used jusr for inside houses)
- http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5273/1stmap.png
.....................................

advise you to use this program : http://www.box.net/shared/ndanq0vk8c
it s better (i used it when i was a beginner )

hope that helps too ....

[Amphi]

http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Phenac_City

phenac city i doubt you'll be able to make it it would probably need brand new tiles made lol but i wish i could convince one of the mappers for pu to add it to the game ^ ^

[baralai15]

well ...

- no grass in cities (safe palce)
- that s not the good way to use the flowred grass xD
- trees are randomly organized
- you don t use the right wood panels
- some tiles a randomly used
- you used some interies tiles (that must used jusr for inside houses)
- http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5273/1stmap.png
.....................................

advise you to use this program : http://www.box.net/shared/ndanq0vk8c
it s better (i used it when i was a beginner )

hope that helps too ....

-Well you could have grass but just no pokemon in it.
-Yea I figured the flowered grass was a little different lol
-Trees arent really even in real life right? But I think I know what you mean?
-What wood panels do you mean?
-What are the random tiles and yea I know some are for inside places but they looked good lol.

Overall thank you for your feedback